|Reviews for For Want of a Jinchuuriki|
| loretta537 chapter 2 . 1/24
this is great! I hope you update it soon
| cglasgow chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
I know you're working on Indomitable, but can you also throw this one some love? There are so few even adequate 'Missing Hokage' fics, and even those require you to suspend lots of disbelief. This is the /only/ one I've found that actually gives solid, logical reasons for all the various steps of the challenge occurring, and that's worth its weight in diamonds. Please update!
| froger495 chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
cant wait for the next chapter.
| notdotworthy chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
This is really really good. I'm not sure why you stopped updating it.
You've got so many great places to go from here, I guess it could be hard to decide which direction.
| notdotworthy chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I love the idea of an unrestrained Hokage Jiraiya. That right there is all you need to make this fic awesome.
The rest is pretty good as well, but the possibilities of the first are mind boggling.
| Zlatka chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
Nice :)) thank you
| somervta chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
Ok, this one is also awesome, but it feels like the start of something that builds much more slowly than Time Braid, and there's only two chapters. If it's been abandoned, could you label it or something? I, and several others I know, am a lot warier about starting abandoned fics, and while this one hits too many of my buttons to miss out on even 2 chapters, many people I know would deliberately avoid getting too into it if they knew it wasn't to be updated
| Mika chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
I still hope you continue this story one day. The two chapters are simply great.
| AnAncientBard chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Unfortunate that this will never get updated.
| Knightowl 4183 chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Funny story, makes sense in early continuity before the later chapters.
| golgotha22 chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
i hope you continue this story some day. it has an interesting premise, sort of close to perfect lionhearts challenge, though executed better than most of the responses ive read.
| BajaB chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
I really like this. It's cute and very amusing. I especially like this last bit with Gaara
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
Please continue updating this story.
| 1sunfun chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
| RisingDaemon chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
nice story pretty sure it's your take on the Missing Hokage challenge right? this is one of the better ones even if it isn't the longest. very well done . keep up the good work.