|Reviews for The Thief of Hogwarts|
| lordofthelazy chapter 19 . 4/13
Hmmmm now while the chances of you updating this at this point are dim, I just wanted to say that this has been a very good read, and I'm glad that you decided to share!
| SB and OGMM chapter 15 . 4/13
Am I the only one that thinks Mrs. Norris was actually an extremely pretty cat? At least, in the movies, that is. It seems that everyone hates her just for being Filch's watch-cat. I personally always found it rather amusing. Anyway, Harry has unwittingly charmed somewhere around 5 dames now? Also, where is Gabrielle? I may be incredibly dim-witted and forgot you mentioning her, but I don't really remember any reference to her, and it is certainly past the time when she is born, right?
Have a Nice Night
| SortingHat chapter 3 . 4/10
I have some good points but also some very bad points to make about this story. The good the bad and the plain ugly. I know it sounds lame!
This story started out initially very good. Keywords (started out)
and I LOVED the references to Thomas The Train as I grew up with the Ringo Starr thru Michael Anglis *if I spelled that correctly* time era and Harry was alive at the right time period when the Thomas VHS tapes were relatively new only a few seasons old I think, though most fans only know of the SHIT I mean HIT entertainment version that took over the original author judging by the Sodar Island Forums and fanfiction in general.
Several early seasons were two parter episodes where the story would continue later on sometimes several episodes down.
For example Thomas Terrence and the snow would be followed up by Thomas and the Great Race as a result of an incident in the snow episode. Then in even later episodes/seasons there would be occasional *in* jokes about the race.
James the "mixed traffic engine" as he was called in one of his early episodes has a bunch of two parters.
My favorite James in a Mess where he makes fun of Toby and Toby reminds him about a boot lace incident during an earlier season that made James more mature.
I've always wondered if the Hogwarts express has an engine as I know some of the controls of a steam train from playing Train Simulator by Rail Works which is a STEAM client game in an ironic fashion.
but the *snogging* half way thru got way out of control when you promised it would not and it has left me very dissapointed.
Don't give some lame excuse like "My fingers sometimes have a mind of you're own" when in reality you ARE in control of you're fingers. It's you that's the problem not you're fingers or mouth but you're personality that needs fine adjustment.
Scientists have proven that our brain makes or breaks connections the more we train ourselves to do something and genetics play a small role too but our brains can be trained.
If you train you're brain in negative sources such as porn or severe cussing then you will eventually *think* it is normal while losing other connections causing you to be disconnected from reality and that's what you become from you're head to you're...
When entire nations collectively become negative they either in the past have come to ruins either thru starvation and/or warfare as citizens become lazy and not keep their governments in check due to caring only about having a *good* time so dictators and lazy people rise into power that offer false promises that they can never achieve.
A quote I like from the bible and a pretty song was done about it by Phil Keggy who started doing music in the 1970s is "There is a time and place for everything"
| sad sabrin chapter 19 . 4/5
Er lovely story
Continue if you can
| HgSpartan chapter 19 . 4/3
Great story. Keep it up! My only suggestion is the addition of line breaks. It would MASSIVELY improve the story. Without them it can get confusing when the scene changes.
| Alex2909 chapter 19 . 4/3
kick ass story
| 2lazy2logon chapter 19 . 3/30
| 2lazy2logon chapter 16 . 3/30
I don't like the Tonks in this book
| Soki711 chapter 17 . 3/29
Best story ever is Brown Coat Green Eyes by nonjon.
| gmgh chapter 19 . 3/19
great story, please continue. i hope that sirius will be happyy in franc ;)
| miguce chapter 19 . 3/18
one of the best hp fics... also one of the rare unique ones... sad that its not being continued anymore...
| dbhulk2014 chapter 19 . 3/15
Just read this story AGAIN, and was D-E-L-I-G-H-T-E-D with the humour that almost jumped off the pages.
This is an EXCELLENT tale that is worthy, in my humble opinion, of being continued...Please?
| Seas and Shadows chapter 19 . 3/15
Moody. Smoking weed.
MOODY. SMOKING WEED.
MOODY'S SMOKING WEED!¡!
| ProditorMagnus chapter 19 . 3/13
Best find of 2015. Abandoned yes, but really good story. Hope to see more of this.
| Yanng chapter 19 . 3/9
Just thought I would put it out there that this is still one of my favorite stories out there, i know it has not been updated in a long time. I still read it at least once a year and am still hopeful that it will be restarted. Either way love the story and thanks for writing as much as you did!