|Reviews for Time Stream Of Memories|
| anonymouz chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
You lied.X( "Why you has no chapter 2?" LoL, i really like the story and akiel seems to be an intriguing character. Kinda nice to see the world through a "non-member's" eyes. Hope you UPDATE SOON!
| Razer Athane chapter 2 . 12/19/2009
"He looks a lot like you." [through to] '...and the days start to rewind.' - omjesus, this is really well written. Keep in mind I haven't played 358/2 Days so... yeah. Omjesus. Love.
"I wonder that myself sometimes..." - Nice line, really fitting of Akiel.
Up to the 'Things happen for a reason.' section, I was (and still am) pretty absorbed; but that whole portion was really, really good. Set the scene perfectly.
Unable to interpret this innocent gesture, I slowly smile back. - DAW! X3
I'm enjoying this so far mate :3 I really like Akiel's... voice? Does that make sense? You know when a character has a 'voice' or... Blah. What I'm saying is I like how I think of him XD
| Razer Athane chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Cool new oneshot, very fluid and lucid; I could totally see Riku swinging his legs like a kid and chatting :3
Btw, you mentioned its a oneshot; you haven't listed it as "complete" :\ I know, FFN's new formatting is weird, sigh -.-
Good to see ya back!