Reviews for Fantasy First Times
weflytothetardis chapter 3 . 2/22/2011
i love this story! it was both extremely hot and very sweet!
XxNovellaxX chapter 3 . 9/8/2009
Oh My GOd...
sonitera chapter 3 . 8/22/2009
it think that this new writing style is missing some setting facts and the metaphors were a little out there [i got lost a couple of times :(]

i enjoyed it nevertheless :)
karen chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
you've written some great chapters! hope to see more soon!
irishleesh93 chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
i liked it

I was different than your other chapters, but in a good way
RowdyRomantic chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
WOW...That was so intence!

Really a great Job...
Aching Bones chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
Hi there,

I most certainly enjoyed...This was beautiful...Loved...

'The flame of their romance had been meticulously built. Twig of trust upon twig of trust, tepeed up until they were ready for larger things - branches of friendship, humility, forgiveness, strength. It all came together so that things burned with a slow and sure constancy. A single twig could go up in flame, but it wouldn't last, could never sustain. But what they had built- this vast bonfire- could not be put out or shaken down. What they had wasn't spontaneous combustion, wasn't the hot, heady passion that would flare and fade. It was a slow burn, that once set would not die'...


'He can only take his eyes away from her beauty because his hands get in the way of his visual feast. He can only tear his hands away from her because his mouth needs to taste her. And when he does, he almost considers kneeling before her in worship, because she has the taste that he identifies as woman, but it is so much more than that'...

So beautifully and so well written...

grc73 chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
One word for this from where I'm sitting - Poetic.

Wonderful writing. :-) More please!
MonaCK chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
Well then. Welcome to the Bones smut community. You did a great job with this - I really enjoy smut fics that are passionate, but not downright dirty - and you have definitely done a good job at portraying that with this fic. Very much enjoyed the coupling. I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort type fics, and this one completely fit the bill.

I look forward to reading more of your work :)
morebones chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
Yep, it's pretty angsty, but pure feelings... pure need...

It almost made my knees buckle. And it was not specially smutty! I really loved it!
grc73 chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
I've just read the first two and they are excellent, very tastefully written! I'd certainly like to read some more please, I really like your writing style.
XxNovellaxX chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
oh wow. this wasa good one.
Chantal chapter 2 . 7/11/2009
LOVE THIS! I really truly love the second was...WOW...breathtaking...Especially the end:

"[...]Because she looks like a woman who deserves better[...]“

"She does," Booth mumbled to himself."She does."

DoctorSweets chapter 2 . 7/10/2009
Great chapter. Loved the ending.
lizook chapter 2 . 7/10/2009
Whoa, hot. *fans self*

I love how this was angsty, but still caring and emotive at the same time. That even through the pain and Booth's doubts they're together. No question.

This line: "It was infinitely familiar, a homecoming to everything he knew. It was fireworks and heat and heart." killed me. So gorgeous.

Another great chapter! Looking forward to more :)
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