|Reviews for Masters of Manipulation: Part Two|
| Url Zod chapter 16 . 12/12/2013
I love it! Great story... The writing is wonderful and so are the plot twists :)
*Can't wait for more*
| Pelspen Love chapter 16 . 11/25/2013
I love it so much! Can't wait for more... Please, update more soon!
| The Happiest chapter 16 . 11/22/2013
Wonderful, wonderful story! I love it, both parts ;) Can't wait for you to get back at it... I'm so needing more chapters *-* Please, update more soon.
Plus: Kudos for your amazing work and writing.
| Nubian Queen chapter 16 . 11/1/2013
I must admit, I had an epic reading session as I blazed my way thru MoM 1&2. This is an amazing read. I love your interaction in this series between T/H. They are spot on and seem perfectly characterized. I am even more amazed when I realize that English is not your native language. While there are a few irregularities, honestly, you write better in English than many authors I've read whose native language it really is. The concept is also really intriguing and you have handled it with aplomb. Your inclusion of the vampires is good as well. I like your characterization of them and am on pins and needles to see where this story goes from here. You have an amazing talent and I sincerely hope you continue this story (preferably sooner rather than later:))
| Beautiful-Liar13 chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
I cannot wait for more of this and the apprentice hope there is more of them all soon
| hufflepuff chapter 16 . 8/15/2013
You're evil. Srsly. Y do i reed ur fix cuz all u do is keep me waiting ;-;
| romione sucks chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
This is an amazing story. Loved the interaction between the main characters. Please please please continue this story!
| NomnomnomDePlume chapter 16 . 6/15/2013
This story makes me squirm... (Not in that way!)
I get the worst sensation whenever i read back through it because i know it's unlikely that it will ever be completed- Still, I would rather have had this much than none at all. You took two of my favourite characters and gave them a different depth that i enjoy immensely, and i think that's it for me... The sensation, like a gnawing in the pit of my stomach, is that i'll never get to see them have the closure that i've felt they deserved from day one.
You made TRJ/HG your own, Christ you even made it feasible... As feasible as it can be, anyway!
I'm not trying to be one of THOSE reviewers, or come off as annoying- Or maybe it's just late and my wine bottles feeling a little empty, i don't know. Maybe i'm just feeling very nostalgic and sentimental.
I've just always found it to be a very involving and enjoyable read, i always will.
*explodes from feelings*
*promptly goes to hell for being mildly lesbian for you, for writing this*
Sorry about that.
I'm probably just trying to say thank you, because i feel like people never really say it enough to fanfic writers. I dunno. Thank you for investing your time and hard work in this, and in turn for giving me something that i found myself deeply invested in.
Nearly a year and a half later and i'm still coming back, you must have written something pretty special. I hope you're proud of that...
Anyway, sorry again. I don't even know if you'll read this- probably/hopefully not!
| shinobinaraku chapter 16 . 5/1/2013
yay! I haven't read masters of manipulation in a looooong time,and I decided to reread all of it. Still as great as I remembered. Are you going to finish it?
Update soon! :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/26/2013
Seriously, bow down to your masterful writing. I actually thought you were English, until i saw your profile.
You write 100 times better than half on here and with better grammar. Like that Romione.
Seriously how can anyone talk like that i'll never know or even attempt, because it's just painful to look at. (Just feel sorry for the ones who get stuck in a conversation with that person) But moving on.
Again you are amazing and not just this, but the others, all of them a fantastic and you really are one of the best i have read so well done. After being bored almost to the point of leaving, it's very hard to find a story that keeps me so interested as you have.
Keep up the brilliant work.
| eleni90 chapter 16 . 3/25/2013
Wow! I mean seriously... Wow! It must be one of the best fanfics I've ever read! I was so captivated by MOM that I read both of them in less than 24 hours. I loved everything about them and the chemistry between Tom and Hermione was just fantastic! The only flaw about this story is that it's not finished :'( Please don't abandon it! I have it when such great stories are left incomplete :-( Please update! I'm practicallybegging you!
| LCB chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
Gosh you right sooo well. I'm in love with your stories. I can totally see this happening!
| LCB chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Oh wow. Scary! Hope he can fix/prevent/stop it. Evil hermione is too scary
| romione 4eva chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I'm so sorry, bt DIS iz d worst typ of schet eva. How U cn pAr Hermione of w dat disgusting : fAc iz beyond me
I wiL prai 4 you, & Mabe U cn b forgiven 4 yor horrible, horrible sins.
how dare U evN hav 6ual situations n a fan fKshn dat iz so horrible
ron iz perfect 4 her & U jst pAr her off w SOME1 hu wiL abuse her
| icelolly94 chapter 16 . 12/3/2012
I am normally a dramione shipper, but your fics are slowly converting me. I love that you stay true to the essence of the characters, for example though Tom loves Hermione he still thinks it is a useless emotion just like the true Lord Voldemort, and he is still bent on achieving his immortality through his horcruxes and that he cannot give up Lord Voldemort for the sake of Hermione.
I'm really enjoying MOM2, more so than the MOM, even though its frequent jumps in time are slightly confusing, especially with the new twist that Tom and Hermione were married.
The one thing I'm slightly confused about is the changing time and alternate universes; is Ron actually the one controlling them? Though he is an Unspeakable, he still isn't the intellectual that both Tom and Hermione are, and both of them had trouble figuring out how the books work as we see in MOM, so I don't really think he is capable even if he somehow got a hold of Eternity of Time as written by Tom.
Please, please update soon. This and "The Apprentice" are quickly becoming my favourite fics and they are both far too brilliant to be left on hold.