|Reviews for Magic dream of temptation|
| The Flame in All of Us chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
| Merthur chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Excellent story, but quite a few mistakes, you could do with a beta reader just to check it over, although I'm guessing from your name that English is not your first language? Well done though!
| Sarahrose660 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
It was really good, and I enjoyed it. But I would say that when you write speech, it would be easier if you used speech marks. It would make more sense.
| BlueSpottedDog chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I love it!
Dreams can mean so much..
And because they can never know...that's even better!
| shootingstarsonmars chapter 1 . 7/8/2009