|Reviews for Let's Keep it Balanced|
| Cat-Tuong chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
reminds me a bit of me and my friend: we're opposites, but it works out somehow )
great job, keep it up
| Halane chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Oh, this was such a nice friendship ff!
In the beginning I didn't actually like them as a couple, though now they've become my fav one, but I still love love love love friendship stuff. They jsut fit together, whatever they relationship is, and I love the way you put it here, the scale metaphor is great, the kind of funny thought Lavi can get xD And I like the way you played with Lavi's personalities, it was a thin line but you somewhat got to stay in it. The fighting scene was great, though I can't really imagine Kanda shouting that much oO I don't know why, but I always find hard to imagine him shouting anything but swearing xD
| Just A Realistic Dreamer chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
Friendship fics are sweet :), and Lavi and Kanda have such an interesting relationship.
The part with Lenalee was my favorite, but that's because I just love these three together x)
| Pup-Ashbless chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I liked this one. You know lately I have been interested in Lavi's and Kanda's relationship in canon and it makes me eager to try to find some good fic/fan work on their - not but at the same time existent- friendship and this was a good quality fic that made me smile. X3
It's pretty likely for them to have a familiar consistent bond despite whatever oddities the other possesess since even alone both are the only exorcists in their age group that are the same age and gender and this fic captures it so simply and quietly that it feels rather right and something natural between them. I liked how you had them play off each other and show reactions to the other's views whether they thought them wrong or right and still at the end be consistent with each other despite coming together over certain issues that even may seem odd for them to be blunt or open about (I know, Kanda and Lavi SHOULD be the very definition of blunt. Well, more tactless for Lavi. But somethings, as you wrote here, are less certain to some eyes all the time).
Comparing Kanda's and Lavi's character's is actually a really fascinating thing as both can be so different and it's actually interesting to see for example that Lavi can be a heck of a lot colder than Kanda is naturally capable of being. Such as you included in here by their regard to Lenalee's freedom to think and feel over a life and how she treats her own and other's.
Overall it was a good relaxing piece of work you made. Thanks for writing. D
By the way Lavi. I think your relationship to Allen is that of a little Bro. I know, you're older, but to Allen you are not. You are one who he greatly cares about as much as he disrepsects (well maybe not that bad, still go elsewhere for more respect as a person...Bratty older Siblings sometimes have a issue with that, when you can be as annoying as you choose to be with them). Xp
| seiyuurabu chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Oops, missed reading this one somehow yesterday. Works well!
Always nice to see someone else viewing them as being much more alike than polar opposites.
| Morphine Dementia chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Love love love. :wtf
I always love the interaction between Kanda and Lenalee, also the way he defended her honor was really believable and uh..sweet and scary? Funny thing is, Kanda does think about the Finders just how Lavi said it, so he's a big bad hypocrite and shouldn't diss Lavi like this. x'D
Did I see some scenes from the RPs again? 8D The teamwork moment, the forks moment and the Lavi-tasting-soba moment. Lol. Sweet. x'D
You described their friendship really nicely, way to go! Though if I have to give some criticism, I'll say that the ending was a bit too sudden. It didn't give out that ending-ending feel, but meh, it works this way too!
Nice work dear, now go write more. 3 : D
| Kuro49 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
This was so pure, kinda like a best-buds fic with some ambiguous sweet scenes :DD I love how their relationship sort of grows and the trouble they faced to maintain this balance. It was very cute and the way Rabi compares the different relationship he has with everyone, gives this an extra quality to it that I really like :DD Rabi knows his limit as an exorcist and a Bookman, so it feels really real XD
Much love from me v
| Shiki105 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
aw, sweet! _