Reviews for The King's Mistress
NeeNee246 chapter 6 . 8/21/2013
This is so fantastic! :)
NeeNee246 chapter 5 . 8/21/2013
I love this! My first guess for whom will be beheaded would be that messenger! LOL That was a bit of a slip eh? LMAO! Whoops sorry my Queen it's not a gift for you! :)
NeeNee246 chapter 4 . 8/21/2013
I am really enjoying this! :)
NeeNee246 chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
This is really fantastic! :)
NeeNee246 chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
I love it! :)
EmmaGoldman chapter 42 . 7/31/2013
God I love Bella! So many other women of that time (and our time) would of just turned around and pretended they were never there.
EmmaGoldman chapter 23 . 7/31/2013
how does the queen think this will save her? She and Edward aren't having sex are they? Also what the hell is going on with Alice? Why would she speak to Bella that way? I know they are very blunt with each other but that just seemed cruel.
EmmaGoldman chapter 11 . 7/31/2013
"she will always remain his mother but wives are replaceable," 16th century cat fight in deed! I actually loved the fight. I know this story is a few years old but man I would love to see an outtake of the conversation between Edward and Tanya.
EmmaGoldman chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
I'm loving this story! I held off reading this for the longest time simply because I do not like cheating stories but I have to say the way you make it clear Bella does not want to cheat but is simply a victim of her time makes the story much more enjoyable.
jus2read chapter 43 . 7/5/2013
WoW! Awesome story ')) great story line, perfect history background! It was just the grammer that let the story down but other then that fantastic story D
just-a-dream92 chapter 39 . 7/2/2013
I have really loved this story but have you considered having a beta read over it?
Only because the many spelling and grammar mistakes can sometimes break up the flow of the story since we have to stop to work out what some of the sentences or words are supposed to say.
DJW Isabella Cullen chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
my thought is uncle phil and tanya...
pauleen chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
O already like thos Story because the way women were pawns during that time does pisses me off. At the same time, that was how it was. Thank goodnes we are blessed to be a live now.
sammieanne chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
You will behead Uncle Phil And Bella's Daddy, Charlie.
ellaward chapter 43 . 5/23/2013
loved your story.
the outtake was interesting. It shows that Bella is really a worthy queen.
Edward on the other hand was a bit confusing!
So i am left with some questions. First what would he have done when Bella had not visited? He also told her earlier in there relationship he was Always faithful to Tanya. If i remember correctly he was married to Tanya for 15 years, but ten years ago he "bedded" 3 women during such an event?
He also says " i bedded women at such an event but i make love to you" . I hope he does not think that having sex without love is not to be considered as being unfaithful? Well it should explain why he thought he was
faithful to Tanya. Please i would like to have some answers, if possible.
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