Reviews for The King's Mistress
n.c g chapter 5 . 12/8/2012
i love this
magmom2 chapter 31 . 11/22/2012
Before I go nuts I have to say people don't wear clocks. I think you might be going for cloaks.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/30/2012
Lovely story. Just confused here. In the last chapter Edward said he slept with three woman that involved the horrendous slavery thing but here he says, "I have never bedded anyone but her!" Just wanted to point that out.
Guest chapter 35 . 10/30/2012
for some reason i think bellas gonna die
Guest chapter 34 . 10/29/2012
Guest chapter 30 . 10/29/2012
oh my god imagine being pregnate?! i know everyone says the the most amazing thing ever in the world but come on get real! morning sickness, all the kicking, not being able to get comfy, dont even mention the pain of labor...what are those people thinkin
Guest chapter 23 . 10/28/2012
bellas getting fat?..or preggers! :D
Guest chapter 17 . 10/27/2012
how can anyone look beautiful while yawning? i look like a dying cow:(
end2097 chapter 39 . 9/30/2012
The story had me hooked from the beginning. It was a bit challenging to read at times but I really enjoyed the development of the story! Thank you!
Vertschl chapter 43 . 9/20/2012
Hey, great story but you might want to correct your mistakes. Some words do not make any sense and in two chapters you mention bellas age but she's younger than before seeing as you changed the age in chapter one.
geekreader28 chapter 39 . 9/16/2012
oh my god, i'm actually crying, i'm not kidding. Such a good end and makes me wish i could find love like those to have.
Such a great story, thank you for sharing it
geekreader28 chapter 37 . 9/16/2012
ugh that was horrible, i feel so bad for her.
Go edward!
geekreader28 chapter 36 . 9/16/2012
oh god, this is horrible:(
geekreader28 chapter 35 . 9/16/2012
ahh what a adorable chapter :) renesmee is a strange name and i like that you changed that, really making this story your own
geekreader28 chapter 34 . 9/16/2012
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