Reviews for The King's Mistress
jus2read chapter 43 . 7/5/2013
WoW! Awesome story ')) great story line, perfect history background! It was just the grammer that let the story down but other then that fantastic story D
xxx
just-a-dream92 chapter 39 . 7/2/2013
I have really loved this story but have you considered having a beta read over it?
Only because the many spelling and grammar mistakes can sometimes break up the flow of the story since we have to stop to work out what some of the sentences or words are supposed to say.
DJW Isabella Cullen chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
my thought is uncle phil and tanya...
pauleen chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
O already like thos Story because the way women were pawns during that time does pisses me off. At the same time, that was how it was. Thank goodnes we are blessed to be a live now.
sammieanne chapter 5 . 6/6/2013
You will behead Uncle Phil And Bella's Daddy, Charlie.
ellaward chapter 43 . 5/23/2013
loved your story.
the outtake was interesting. It shows that Bella is really a worthy queen.
Edward on the other hand was a bit confusing!
So i am left with some questions. First what would he have done when Bella had not visited? He also told her earlier in there relationship he was Always faithful to Tanya. If i remember correctly he was married to Tanya for 15 years, but ten years ago he "bedded" 3 women during such an event?
He also says " i bedded women at such an event but i make love to you" . I hope he does not think that having sex without love is not to be considered as being unfaithful? Well it should explain why he thought he was
faithful to Tanya. Please i would like to have some answers, if possible.
Emerald Eyed Wolf Girl chapter 2 . 5/3/2013
eeek! so good!
Guest chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
I don't like Bella.
Twiheart1901EC chapter 7 . 4/18/2013
Omg omg omg she ever explain this!
SliverFlick chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Can I ask a question? If the Queen hadn't had her period in two months, maybe she was pregnant?
AfricanAngel94 chapter 8 . 4/3/2013
you should write edwards point of view for this story it would be very good
Cookie2202 chapter 39 . 3/31/2013
I love this story it is amaazing :-)
And it reminds me a lot of the Empress of Austria and Queen of Hungary Elizabeth or short Sissi. She was the one who did help the poor and who wanted to change things. She also was the first who wanted to raise her children :) so I imagine Sissi being a lot like Bella. Emperor & King Franz should have married her sister but he fell in love with Sissi :)
Part of Austrias history in your ff :)
Lovely!
XOXO Carmen
JustARead chapter 37 . 3/28/2013
:(
Guest chapter 33 . 3/27/2013
Twins?
Guest chapter 30 . 3/27/2013
Awww :)
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