Reviews for The King's Mistress
shorty84 chapter 8 . 7/31/2009
Wow, what a chapter! I'm glad Bella stood up to the King even if she shouldn't have. Esme took a leap there telling Bella all about her and Edward's past? Who knows..maybe Edward will be mad at her enough to kill her unfortunately or she does it herself? Great update!
jkp13452 chapter 8 . 7/31/2009
i hope that you continue to write more i absoulutly LOVE this story!
Jayleen-Cullen-Whitlock-Hale chapter 8 . 7/31/2009
Hmm Edwards. Being a prick LOL I would have yelled at him too pshh I would have been lie I can yell at u all I want I don't care who u. Are behead me if u don't like it I don't care LOL I won't be bosses around like that besides my parents hmph anyway fantastic chappie and esme story made me cry
Booklover00 chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
This chapter is really good I cant wait to see what he does.
14tara14 chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
HA i KNEW IT! it is mike newton that twistd basterd! oh poor edward, and poor bella, sucks that she choses to zone out with mike of all people. though i still thik a member of bellas family is going to be beheaded, though i dout it will be bella otherwise their wouldn't be anymore left to tell right! yah so great story, just finished it you need to up date soon, its really good

though watchvthe way your spelling things, your grammers a little off, just a heads up.

yours truly 14tara14
14tara14 chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
is it charles bellas father? and obveously mike, i mean who wouldnt behead mike newton? lol
medward chapter 7 . 7/28/2009
I can't believe that she forgot that she was dancing with Mike! ugh!
i 3 m silver chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
so mike newton made a move she was day dreaming of edward, newton kisses her and she kisses back day dreaming of kissing the good ol king
MoonlightxMidnight chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
go to hell mike newton! Oh and I'm guessing again, and I gave it much more thought. I don't think Bella is getting chip chopped. I think the two that are going to be killed are Alice and Emmett
RissaCullen-TeamEdward chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
not *oh* *ah*! wat the heck is going to happen? ugh... how could the king behead mike for kissing her.. or could he behead her? nah, not this early in the story... i hope
emmettandrose4ever chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
um. everybodys saying mike? but uh I don't know. Maybe like Carlisle or Esme? idk.

it was really good though:D

! whitney !
caseytabwizz chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
Omg! Please update soon!
GabzR chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
love it i hope u update soon
jkp13452 chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
That was a good story! I hope that u continue. I hope that the next chapter is longer and christmas night... Do you think jacob is going to b in the story. Oh i was wondering if she was kissing newton or the king?
twiliteroxuresox chapter 7 . 7/27/2009
who guessed rite? tell me! ] lol anyway gr8 story! loved every minute. update? ]
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