Reviews for The King's Mistress
blb1000 chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
She hasn't seen mistreatment, I fear, until the Queen funds out what they are up to.
blb1000 chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
Nice start!
CuriousPotato chapter 2 . 1/18/2016
I'm only on cheater two but Who is the king? Is it Edward or carlisle? I am eager to keep reading!
Jcook169 chapter 42 . 1/3/2016
No offense but as a late add on that chapter was a punch in the guy. Great writing as usual but it only took away from the story. I am sure events like this took place but still. I wish I never read this chapter - I think it is still disrespectful to Bella and Rosalie. For some reason I felt the need to let you know how I felt but please don't think I didn't like the rest of the story, this chapter just really bothered me.
Kate chapter 19 . 11/4/2015
Love it
Guest chapter 21 . 9/3/2015
Banana? An entire wall of glass? Women on the Privy Council? It does my head in. Just a little research on sixteenth century England would be good.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/2/2015
Enjoying the story, but soooo many errors! You need a beta. Had to laugh when being called 'pompous' is described as a compliment! That aside though, I am enjoying the story even if I find all the grammar, spelling & historical errors distracting
Willowstar23 chapter 4 . 8/16/2015
I think rosalie is a baddie.
jk chapter 27 . 4/29/2015
why hadn't they been together in weeks? does the king have other whores? why don't we hear about them? I thought they were just together in the tub like a few days ago...I missed something
jk chapter 26 . 4/29/2015
im confused...Edward was all weird because bella didn't praise his...and he said that all the women hes been with have something about the center of him...anyway heres where im confused...hasn't he been in a faithful marriage for 15 years? and before that he was only 17 sooooooo when did all these other woman come into the picture?
Mia chapter 39 . 4/27/2015
Ure gud...i just prefer smtin more city lyk...u sud write more kay?cos ure gud
Guest chapter 8 . 2/13/2015
Esme was married to the king so it would go to Edward to step up. Esme moved out for a simple life? I think Bella's dad may be beheaded and I'm not sure who else. Don't think Tanya
robertpatzlover09 chapter 43 . 2/9/2015
loved it all, going into my favourites
sury.h chapter 43 . 2/1/2015
Good story. Thank you!
KimiD chapter 42 . 1/18/2015
Whoa she was flamin' mad at him! But I could see her point of view... it did not look good when she came in there and found what was going on. I would have jumped to the same conclusions... whew!
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