|Reviews for The Official Journal of Amory Blaine|
| insaneartist chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
I like how you ended your short story with the same ending as the book. I also like how you used his vocabulary, it made it more like Amory instead of just a story about Amory.
| insaneartist chapter 2 . 7/20/2010
"Even though I am not praised by my peers yet, I have indeed gained the praise of several others in this establishment." I liked that line quite a bit.
| insaneartist chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
It's been a while since I've read "This Side of Paradise", however, this does seem to be a lot like Amory Blaine; kudos to you for staying in character. *hug*(because I hate when people just make a new person out of a character for no reason or any story/explanation behind the change)
| Dumbledoor chapter 4 . 2/25/2010
Aw, this is so Amory Blaine! - dunno what that really means but I think it's good!
| Roxxi May chapter 4 . 1/2/2010
WOW, this was incredible. It's nice to see some 'Paradise' fanfiction. It's such a great and popular book, that's too bad it doesn't have its own spot in the Books section.