Reviews for The Captive
NazaKaos chapter 22 . 3/8/2020
Okay that was a really good story but that does not feel like an ending at all. Anyway thanks for writing it tho!
AliceCullen0629 chapter 22 . 8/1/2019
ok story
futurecullen26 chapter 22 . 6/3/2018
I am throughly (and simultaneously) unsatisfied and completely satisfied by this ending. I need resolution but I also don't. Great job!
CountryBaby93 chapter 22 . 9/15/2016
It was a good story, but it wasn't a Bella/James story. Not even in the slightest.
Robin.D chapter 22 . 6/22/2016
that was a good story :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 21 . 6/22/2016
wow Edward let him kiss Bella :-o good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 20 . 6/22/2016
Why are you so scared of me now :-( she's not the same Bella when she is with eddie :-( good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 19 . 6/22/2016
so James." is back :-) good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 18 . 6/22/2016
i liked Emmett :-) good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 17 . 6/22/2016
see her dad missed her :-( good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 16 . 6/22/2016
that was a good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 15 . 6/22/2016
wow he just let her go :-o good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 14 . 6/22/2016
The Cullens have found you :-/ but is that what she wants now :-/ good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 13 . 6/22/2016
Victoria's gone ;-) good :) good chapter :):):):)
Robin.D chapter 12 . 6/22/2016
wow poor Bella :-( good chapter :):):):)
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