Reviews for breath in for luck
Shockwave99 chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Tis not an uuber smut fail! Its better than some epic failures at smex that i've read. :) Nice job! *thumbs up*
chiaroscurra chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
So like, wow.

:D

The smut was pretty awesome. Also, I worship AkuKai. And your portrayal/portrayol/however you spell it/something of them was really good and they're exactly as I imagined them. Yeah, this was a win. :)

Do write more.
Xidori-chan chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
wow...that was pretty good! Nice Job!
Lemonmaker12 chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
This was actually a very good story. It has the emotional involvment that alot of lemons truly due lack. I haven't seen one this good in a long long time. Have fun and keep the work up.
venting martians chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
SQUEE! great story

I laughed at the bashing grandma part!