|Reviews for A Long Breath|
| Mackenzie chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
very good! nice job.
| Krolshi chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Ohmigawd that was not funny! TT I though he was actually gone... that is was going to be another tragic lost memory story ** Thank gawd it wasn't! Nice FF, hehe very cute
| SuneUtada chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I know I'm a complete stranger but please, please, if you have any compassion,,,,WRITE MORE! Pretty please! I love it! I want to stalk you (in a non creepy way) :)
| R.E. Weissrose chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Sweet and touching, yay!
You portraited the relationship between them well. I love it XD
And awww... Miss Luka is playing hard to get :P
Thanks for the chap! :D Gotta sleep now ;)
| Riza Tukudo chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Luv this~~ Gakupo is my fav! x3
| pppppp chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I really love this developing love interest between Kamui and Luka. but since I am not deeply involved vocaloid fan I am having trouble understanding who Teneko is...but overall it was very nice.
| InuMaru-Chama chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
great love it!
| baemitchabernathy chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I fell over at the Len/Gakupo part! I was playing an Rp where Len and Gakupo were Yaoi-like and stuff... it freaked me out a bit... Great Story!