Reviews for Identity
sheppardlover928 chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
My heart went out to this soldier (ok, I knew it was John) but still-his pain and suffering could be any POW..and even the strongest soldier is still human.
B.E.W chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
This story is exceptionally bueatiful, though i feel like wanting to know, its like a trailer to a movie. I would love to read more of it. I do hope you continue this story.
shepsgirl72 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
This was very intense. You convey the pain and his inner tormoil very well.

It was hard to read all in one block, but worth the effort!:D
Sharpe's Hussy chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This brings tears to my eyes

While the character is fictitious, the reality of

POWs is not...
Potterworm chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Like the other reviewers, I gotta say this: This should really be divided into paragraphs.
HedgeNinja chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I agree this needs to be broken up into several paragraphs to make it easier to read, but I still enjoyed it. A nicely written snapshot.
cflat chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Have you ever heard of spaces? I mean, this is humongous! And you expect us to read all of that and not get lost? Or loose focus? A proper-sized paragraph is about 7 lines.

It would be a really great idea to repost this and have proper-sized paragraphs in here.