Reviews for Line Of Fire
vampire messenger chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
psst write a sequel where edward changes bella and bella rips him apart. it would be awesome oh yeah have alice come back from teh dead because a vampire used its power on her and healed her
blackbox2940 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I FUCKING HATE YOU! *CRY,SOB,CRY* YOU SUCK YOU BASTARD!
Sinister Whispers chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
*B!tch Slaps Edward* HOW DARE YOU! YOU ARE A STUPID SPARKLING VAMPIRE! *Smack* I HATE YOU! *Smack* EAT THE COOKIE! *Shoves cookie down throat* MWAHAHAHA!
WereWolf Girl and Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
that was very good. i would like it if you had a sequel/
xoJaymexo chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
hm...you should totally make a sequel or continuation. good job, tho. interesting twist...im like it!
Stand Through The Pain chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
i liked it and it gives me all the more reason to like jasper more :)
puppylover chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
sad ending! but good story. can u come up with more?
xXxZellyxXx chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
wow everything went great, the song went great, everything, very very good, ciao
DemzRulez chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
You make me Hate edward and i love him. Btw my username is DemzRulez
belwight chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
EDWARD SHOULD JUST DIE!
GoldenNugget chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
oh... my... god...
Echoes-of-Dreams chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Aww, how sad. Poor Alice, and poor Bella for having to live with the pain and...Edward. Ick.

On the happier side, I got a new song to add to my playlist, thanks!
Kai-chan14 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Oh no! What have you DONE? *points at you accusingly* You KILLED her! Edward killed her! *cries* That hurts...I hate him even more now! D': Friggin...turdhead...nice story...even though my heart was hurt in the process of reading it...good work...lol
Geezorbee chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
So you make eddie nice for 2 stories... then you make him a total ass again? :O Lol

Great message in this song/fic, although the song is not in my taste

Cheers D