Reviews for Vixen
Bookwormkat1 chapter 51 . 3/1
The one thing I will not forgive you for, much in the same way as you cannot forgive JKR for killing Severus in the original story, I won't forgive you for killing Minerva, she has always been my absolute favourite, both in the books and the films.
However, don't take it as a flame, because it completed the story, much as the death of Severus did in the books, it needed to happen to teach us, and remind us of the story. But, my god, I CRIED. It hurt to read her as dead!
But... I went very much on a rollercoaster of emotions and nerves when I read Vixen. I loved it. I have often imagined what characters would be in their animagus forms, and Hermione always ended up as a fox or wolf or big cat of some sort. But fox was best, at least or especially for the purposes of this story.
I don't tend to review a story until I come to the end of all updates available updates - I'm too impatient and like to get into a flow when reading, a lot of the time I don't even notice that I've clicked the 'next' button...
Your writing skills could be a little touched up in places - did you have a beta for this story? If not, that would explain a few things that aren't really anyone's fault, just something that would get picked out by a second reader. Don't take it as an insult, please - I think that everyone learns by their mistakes, not their triumphs: after all, if we already knew everything, what would be the point? I'm not perfect by any stretch of the mind, either.
All flames can be used to roast marshmallows, after all ;)
And once again, I loved your story 'Vixen'. You have a beautiful imagination. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 51 . 2/15
This is quite a cute story! Would love to see more of fox-Hermione!
heavenslilagl420 chapter 51 . 2/15
Guest chapter 51 . 2/3
AMW1014 chapter 50 . 2/2
Loved this story and it was really well written. Wish you hadn't killed off McGonagall but because you portrayed my favourite ship so well I will forgive you :) Thank you for sharing
justliveyourlife123 chapter 36 . 1/22
I am proud of u
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hisnhers chapter 29 . 1/22
oh dear...

hisnhers chapter 27 . 1/22
grrrrrr Malfoys...

hisnhers chapter 15 . 1/21
very nice dueling chapter.

hisnhers chapter 13 . 1/21
Enjoying this.

hisnhers chapter 7 . 1/21
holy cow! Harry you idiot! what! really? Severus needs to get him suspended this time. honestly!

Also, I'm gonna say... hermione must live based on your 'facts' about familiars and this IS a hermione/snape fic. if she dies in ch 7, then the next 43 chapters will be useless for me to read. ;)

hisnhers chapter 4 . 1/21
lol! Vixen going after Williard, the toad. That was devious. lol!

hisnhers chapter 3 . 1/21
so far this fic is quite interesting! I'm enjoying it!

riskeybusiness chapter 51 . 1/20
Absolutely loved it! Wish I was an animagus! Th ask for sharing :)
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