Reviews for Vixen
oneeyereader chapter 1 . 19m
Where is luna
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 52 . 5/11
I loved the plot behind the story; I thought it was creative and enjoyable to read even though your characters were very OOC. I will say, however, that I thought the story was somewhat abrupt in the beginning and jumped into the story almost too quickly. Overall you did a great job, although your overuse/ improper use of the semicolon was a little irksome. Keep writing! :0)
Ravendaughter chapter 52 . 5/9
Okay… wow
This story is…
I dont know how I…
It is amazing.
I love it.
Really, I do.

Wow :D
Opal chapter 52 . 5/4
I really enjoyed this story it is WICKED
Guest chapter 52 . 5/3
This story was ingenious, amazing, and touching. I truly enjoyed it.
bookworm661 chapter 51 . 4/20
Absolutely love it!
HollowQueen chapter 1 . 4/16
I read this on quotev...idk if it was you who put it up or not but i do love your writing and i'm sorry it plagiarized
Guest chapter 35 . 4/9
Really good story
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
I think you have a really good plot going on here. Something I noticed: you could use a beta reader for clarity and grammar. You are way off on comma usage, not often using them at all. Another thing a beta reader would help you with would be making sure you use terms correctly. For example, Snape expresses worry that Hermione will "moult". Molting is generally used solely for avian species. For a fox, the proper term would be "shed".

Still, you have a solid plot here. The story could just use some cleaning.
behindblueeyes1117 chapter 50 . 4/3
I just wanted you to know that I really loved this story. The plot was really great and there was cliffhangers, nice moments, sadness, laugh and love. I'm pretty sure you can do even better with a bit more maturity but it was marvellous ;-)
Aiden Garton chapter 18 . 4/3
Hermione must be pretty embarrassed waking up in her normal form right in professor shapes arms
Comic Critic chapter 52 . 4/2
I can't even explain how good this was. I cried, I laughed, I shook with anticipation and I beamed with joy at the ending. I honestly have been searching for 2 years, for a fan fiction that is as good as yours! Take pride in the fact that your story had the power to inflict emotions just from reading your words. This story was absolutely without a doubt, SWICKEDYAWETASTIC! 3
Darkhairfurrytail chapter 52 . 4/2
This story is definitely in my top 5 favorite SSHG fics. I loved it so much!
MyNialla chapter 21 . 4/2
OMG HILARIOUS! I mean, I feel bad for Hermione falling and all, but I just keep picturing an old lady hitting Severus upside the head with a handbag and now I'm laughing again! LOL keep it up!
AW Science Geek chapter 52 . 4/1
This was an extremely well written masterpiece! I haven't really considered SS/HG, but you wrote it so skillfully and emotionally that I was just sucked in! Job well done, can't wait to continue reading Redemption!
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