Reviews for Maid Service
snow. x . fairy chapter 6 . 3/10/2015
I wonder what's up with Cloud .
snow. x . fairy chapter 7 . 3/10/2015
Funny xD
BlissfulNightRain chapter 1 . 12/7/2014

damn Kairi carried SORA? Sora's a twig or Kairi's some body-builder, one or the other xD

I wonder why there's some awkward tension between Sora and Roxas? Guess I'll have to read and find out

Looks like this is gonna be one wild ride!
beepboop1234 chapter 17 . 5/29/2014
Being Sora sounds great, when you get friendzoned it's just like "Don't give a flying poop! Gonna be happy anyways!" Shame about him and Kairi but I liked their ending, it was sweet and maybe Sora met someone nice at college who has no problems and he can just have fun "expressing himself" :P

Loved his scene with taking out Cloud as well, was like something straight out of a Disney movie, even if he didn't know what he was on about really it's the thought that counts right?

Haha poor Olette! Zexion is such a meany but he has to be one of my favourites in this so I can't stay angry with him... and damn you Demyx! Ain't gonna dance to your water ever again!

Marluxia was thirty five? I had no idea! xD may he and Miguel live happily ever after and have hundreds of fabulous pink haired babies.

Roxas and Namine are another one of my favourite couples so that suits me perfectly I just hope she gets over the passing out stage soon, and no sex till marriage? Good luck Roxas! :D

I don't think this story can be easily described, it's one of those ones you just have to read and you'll love it just because it's utter genius, and if all the crazy plots, insane characters, great references and hilarious lines don't get you there is always Axel just doing what he does best )

Anyway I loved this! I'll have to find something else to read from your list of stories now... let's see...
beepboop1234 chapter 16 . 5/29/2014
Mickey Mouse to the rescue! Loved that, also the falcon punch... brings back memories of Super Smash Bros :D

It's getting pretty intense between Sephiroth and Cloud, never thought I'd be hoping for Cloud to lose though... if Kairi had shot him I don't know what I would've done, too much drama xP

What the hell is wrong with Axel? xD And eww get Vista outta here, is the Vexen Riku thing to do with the replica?

My fingers are crossed for a happy ending, no JMtT cry myself to sleep endings please :'D
beepboop1234 chapter 15 . 5/29/2014
Sora in Twilight... I'd read every book and watch every movie :')

Ah there's the part with Marluxia being a matador, I was wondering when that would come up :D Nice way to use Radiant Garden and Hollow Bastion, that's clever o.o

"Can you pump my gas?" - That has to be the most awkward yet hilarious thing I've ever read in my life, poor Genesis, at least he got over Sephiroth though

Kairi and Namine (and their hair) must be saved!
beepboop1234 chapter 14 . 5/28/2014
Sora is just too damn innocent, pretty adorable but he needs to be quick and get out before Riku steals his lady! I was wondering where Olette has been these past chapters, just kinda poofed...

Xaldin did always loom a bit rapey... o.o I'm sure Sephiroth will manage just fine though :P

What is ventus up to?! Shit is going dooooooooown :O
beepboop1234 chapter 13 . 5/28/2014
DA DA DADADA DA DA DADADA, DADADA DADADA DA DA DA! Halloween Town best world forever! :D Got Stitch in their as well, loved that show so much...

The part with Axel almost dying with Sora and talking about giving his last words to Roxas, brings back so many feels :'( I hope he gets through it in this one though.

SACRIFICE THE VIRGINS! Oogie Boogie's motives sure have changed o.o I loved Marluxia's POV, him being so grossed out by everything was hilarious xD

Gah I want Sora to man up so Kairi will like him again... and there is no way that Roxas wasn't cheered up by Namine in a nurse suit, like that would work on any straight guy guaranteed :P
beepboop1234 chapter 12 . 5/27/2014
Grrr can't believe Cloud did that to little Namine... Team Sephiroth all the way!

So many references in this one, Sora's dream, Dance, water dance, Not having a heart... KH 2 anyone?! :D

So Kairi won't have anything with Sora either... all my favourite pairs are dying around me D: But it is nice to see some other ones every now and then, although, there aren't many people left for Kairi... xD

Sora is just so special :') Really enjoyed this chapter, was grinning like an idiot the whole way through
beepboop1234 chapter 11 . 5/27/2014
Nooooooooo Riku and Namine are not happening :'( But Axel and Roxas kissed so that makes up for it, hehe :P Very drama queen of Roxas and his "Kissing virginity".

Axel's phone call to Sephiroth has to be one of the best things in this story so far xD It should replace the example for exaggerating in every single dictionary in the world.

I really feel there should be some fan art of the restaurant scene, the image is just too perfect. Sephiroth at the head bored out of his mind with a party hat, Zexion with his book, Genesis getting all teary, Sora jumping round the table... I think I'd like to do it myself even when I get time :D

So there is like magic in this story right? the book... Axel's fire... I feel like I'm missing something xP
beepboop1234 chapter 10 . 5/27/2014
ROXXEL! XD I've been looking forward to that bit, why won't Roxas love him back thoooughhh :( I guess they canÄt all be gay can they? haha

I don't know why but it only just hit me that the fight is between Cloud and Sephiroth... sort of a big deal :P I wonder if Zack will betray Sephiroth at some point :O I'm thinking about the plot again, never mind.

Zexion is so adorable around Demyx, pretty funny since Demyx isn't the exactly the uh... manliest member of organisation XIII :)
beepboop1234 chapter 9 . 5/26/2014
DEMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYXXXX! For me he is my most memorable organisation member, (excluding the god like three, we all know who I mean) purely because he was one of the first Sora meets properly and it's just total "Wtf, who are you and why are blowing bubbles at my face" xD And Zexion has a cruuuuuuuuuuuuush :P I guess the title is referring to Zexion? And yes they doooo

Sora is so cute with Kairi, I can't wait for them to go out together :) And who are Roxas, Riku and Namine gonna end up with, so hard to tell...

Sadly I don't think I can read this all tonight, sorry D: I take quite a bit of time with reviews and I don't think it's me to read stories super fast, I enjoy them more when I take my time if you know what I mean :)

Buuut since I'm at a halfway point I will say that I completely love this so far, I'm laughing my ass off during every chapter and it definitely keeps me in high spirits despite having to revise for pooey exams. Happy that I started this after FmH (god that story was amazing... memories,,, tears :') ) was definitely the best way to go about it :D

Will continue tomorrow!
beepboop1234 chapter 8 . 5/26/2014
Damn that is freaky... one of my friends called Damien is completely obsessed with anything horror related, his apartment gives me the creeps sometimes, but he's awesome so it's cool Maybe he knows a Zexion, I should ask him.

Aww I thought Seifer would actually get a decent grade, the kids seemed to really like him despite kicking Genesis off of a buliding... ohhh well :D

Marluxia's POV was pretty great, "Must not... murder the children... stay calm..." I hope he gets to be with someone in the end though, maybe Genesis hehe :P

I wonder what sephiroth has planned next...
beepboop1234 chapter 7 . 5/26/2014
I liked that Axel was the first to figure out that Sephiroth was actually looking for weaknesses, he knows more than anyone after all :P So Axel likes Roxas, but Roxas starting to feel for Namine, and so is Namine a little, but Namine likes Riku too... Love quadrilateral... kinda?

I think the Sephiroth wants Roxas to take over! wild guess but it feels like it could be right... maybe :P Did he bring the kids in to try and teach them how to care for others and stuff?

Haha, drunk Tifa being a teacher reminds me of what you were telling about education before :P It's awesome that she is though, maybe she will be with Cloud in the end possibly? So many things I want to find out, hooray for the next button!
beepboop1234 chapter 6 . 5/26/2014
O.O I can't... I can't comprehend it, the dresses, the make up... maybe this is what the Organisation really does in KH D: That whole scene was freaking hilarious though. Especially Axel and Marluxia, naturals,

Wait why do Sora and Riku want to leave? Noooooooooooooooooooooooo :'( Really cute scene between him and Kairi though, was the part where you described Kairi with her hands behind her back on purpose? Like how she always has them behind and Namine has them in front in the games, I always found it awesome how they did that :D

Did Zexion just suck someone into a book? I wasn't expecting that xD
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