Reviews for A Lighter Shade Of blue
Johanna-002 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Okay, the story has potential and I admit I am intrigued, but I do have a few errors of concern and somethings I'd like to bring to your attention.

1)- Try to NOT put your thoughts (Authors note's) in the middle of everything. It can get annoying. Example-

"Reba still couldn't **(as do many of us veiwers)** see why he would leave her for that

mo-ron **(ha ha kinda like Christopher Rich said at CMT Giants: Reba that it was purely fictional )** "

More Correct Version-

"Reba still couldn't see why he would leave her for that mo-ron!"

2)- I don't know if you noticed you were doing this or not, but don't make a new paragraph while you are in the middle of a paragraph. I'll use the same example from above-

"Reba still couldn't (as do many of us veiwers) see why he would leave her for that

mo-ron (ha ha kinda like Christopher Rich said at CMT Giants: Reba that it was purely fictional )"

See how it's all spaced and it's kind of the WTF! LOL. Try your hardest to look over your work so it looks more like:

"Reba still couldn't see why he would leave her for that mo-ron!"

3)- Please do not take this Review offensive or rude. I hope you do not think I am trying to flame you or anything of the sort. I am just being honest and trying to express a few errors that i noticed were repetitive and slightly annoying to myself. Like I said, I see potential for this story and I am some what intrigued. I kind of hope Reba will kill Barbra Jean, but then I have this feeling that she should refrain because then at the end of it all she'd probably lose all of her family. I,e. If she were charged and sent to prison for her crime. So I have mixed feelings 'bout murdering Barbra Jean, but I think it would always make as a nice thought: An evil ploy! LOL
Chatte578 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
i wonder what would happen if she did kill bj would brock be happy mad sad, i would like reba to fight for brock and brock realize he is still in love with his wife reba, update
Reba0is0Ahmazing chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
i want you to update this story!
annieforbush chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
i love it,and a slap fight sounds better to me!

(oh and the junior league is thoes mom who do stuff ike sell cookies for the school and stuff -sorta-)