|Reviews for Generic Mary Sue Crack Fic|
| 42AnimeLover42 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
*stifled laughing* Hehehe, it was ither the bacon dolls story or this who made my day! The only question left is how did Al kill him self with a bacon doll hmm...
| Daney Hearts Pichu chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
lol edward almost said cullen. funny.
| Kame-tan chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
That Edward Cullen line made my day, it was so funny!
| PorcupineWeirdo chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Amazing, simply amazing.
| Mird chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
“Edward Cull-I mean Elric!”
I'm not kidding- I laughed at this. Loudly. Perfect!
There was much pathetic squealing from Isabella Clairice Sunnyweather Moondove Rennesme, some anguished cries from Ed, (Like in all cheesy romance movies) and a lot of blood and ninja moves.
Change it to 'and a lot of blood and slow-motion ninja moves.' Much more dramatic and sexy...
I love it! Thank you for giving me a marvelous Sue parody to read! *huggles you*
| Kiku-chan3322 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
sorry i'm too lazy to login.
anyway this story was a piece of shit...
JUST KIDDING! lol. i scaried u didn't i? lol. i'm a dirty trickster today, ignore it xDD
but, seriously this was hilarious! i love the ninjas! and the ending part was so freaking true! it came together really well :)
i got a good laugh.