Reviews for Generic Mary Sue Crack Fic
42AnimeLover42 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
*stifled laughing* Hehehe, it was ither the bacon dolls story or this who made my day! The only question left is how did Al kill him self with a bacon doll hmm...
Daney Hearts Pichu chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
lol edward almost said cullen. funny.
Kame-tan chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
That Edward Cullen line made my day, it was so funny!
PorcupineWeirdo chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Amazing, simply amazing.
Mird chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
“Edward Cull-I mean Elric!”

I'm not kidding- I laughed at this. Loudly. Perfect!

There was much pathetic squealing from Isabella Clairice Sunnyweather Moondove Rennesme, some anguished cries from Ed, (Like in all cheesy romance movies) and a lot of blood and ninja moves.

Change it to 'and a lot of blood and slow-motion ninja moves.' Much more dramatic and sexy...


I love it! Thank you for giving me a marvelous Sue parody to read! *huggles you*
Kiku-chan3322 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
sorry i'm too lazy to login.

anyway this story was a piece of shit...

JUST KIDDING! lol. i scaried u didn't i? lol. i'm a dirty trickster today, ignore it xDD

but, seriously this was hilarious! i love the ninjas! and the ending part was so freaking true! it came together really well :)

i got a good laugh.

good job!