|Reviews for After Atlantis|
| eating lunch chapter 1 . 3/6
idk what's up with that fox person (they seem to have. a lot of issues that they need to hash out), but i really enjoyed your story.
trailbreaker and wheeljack are two of my favorite characters and i never imagined together. the dynamic you established between them in their relationship was painful in a real way - cause yeah, learning how to cope w trauma and finding your boundaries and standing by them afterwards is really difficult. i was hurting for wj the whole way through (and tb by extension)
anyways i'm really happy that the story ended on an optimistic note. thanks for writing it, hope you'll receive this review five years down the line.
| The Fox Familliar chapter 7 . 10/26/2014
HAHAHA DISREGARD THAT, I SUCK COCKS
| Russet Burbanks chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
This is... beyond my knowledge. Oh sure! He gets raped, blah blah blah, and people LIKE this crap? What the frick is WRONG with you people? I have no faith in humanity whatsoever after this.
And reported for MA content. Good grief, this doesn't even belong on AO3! This is crap!
| The Fox Familiar chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
Are you fucking kidding me? Wheeljack is upset that Ratchet won't fuck him because he got raped?
Now here's where you go worse than Mary-Sue. Good to know that Wheeljack is so OOC he gets pissed off when his best friend turns him down not soon after he got RAPED and still wants SS's cock. Know what that makes him? A selfish, stupid, brat that deserves no pity but a bullet to the head. You think you're canon faithful? You're not fooling anybody. What makes you think a rape victim will immediately go and fuck someone else, consensually, after being ravaged? What makes you think anyone should pity Wheeljack now?
Wheeljack is acting like a stupid and selfish faggot. He ceases to be a sentient being. He's just a toy for others to play with and this is a sign of cheap writing and a lack of talent. It's no different than how the Suethors do it. Wheeljack just sits there and moans and groans and everyone does absolutely nothing. But when someone isn't getting raped, they're shagging each other because that is totally hot.
None of this makes any sort of sense and you have deserve these flames. I don't even know if I can make it to the other chapters because this story is so goddamned awful. You really have shat all over these characters and canon wouldn't make sense to you even if you bothered to look it up. It also wouldn't bother for you to research what happens to rape victims - male or female - and how all of them want their rapist to pay, by blood or by law. But what's really telling is how you don't even make an explanation as to why Starscream would even need rape, but he just does it because it makes this story go along.
That, my dear, is a sign of weakness and bad writing. You don't even try and now you're making a case for consensual rape or that Wheeljack asked for it. Know what I have to say to that?
Go fuck yourself with a railroad spike. Hard. If anyone even plagiarized you, then that REALLY shows something. Who'd want to plagiarize a rape lover? Some world this is.
TL;DR You fucked over canon, you fucked everything up. Rot in Hell, bitch, and take your followers with you.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
Good to see this story has zero plot whatsoever and the author is too busy justifying the rape of Wheeljack. I'm sorry, but nobody asks for rape and certainly they don't have inner thoughts that they WANTED it. Now that you've used that line more than once, it shows me how much of a sub-human you are. Even Suethors don't even sink to this level.
"Skyfire may have been more than Starscream's partner" - He's obviously his gay lover. He should spread 'em long and wide for Suspender Striptease! Because everyone just HAS to be gay. No reason. Just gay. Because why? Tolerance. Go away if you don't like it, you hater.
If Starscream's a rapist, I don't see any hatred towards him. It's kind of natural to hate your rapist because they did take away your humanity, after all. But WJ doesn't have a problem and he just Asked for It. Maybe he should get a pair of underwear that says he's available. Who needs an engineer whose inventions are vital when you got a rapee moaning and groaning and wanting his rapist's cock again? What amazing story-telling, yo!
This isn't PTSD. Not even close. It's called Special Snowflake Syndrome.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
"Mirage is attractive and exotic" - Female centrism right there. Of course he HAS to be gay. There's gotta be that "Oh, they're genderless BUT they can have both a spike and a valve!" crap, and this is no exception. Now it seems you're just copying and pasting from the show which is a huge no-no, and plus, it is ridiculously hard for me to take anything seriously as Wheeljack is just moping around and everybody is just quiet about it. No outrage? No plans for revenge? Nothing? Wheeljack must've really been asking for it, then.
"They had their work cut out for them" - And so do I. What can I grab from an author who toots her own horn louder than does? Jesus, WJ is like Bella but worse. He needs to man up already.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
What a second. Are you implying that Wheeljack ENJOYED being ravaged? Ergo, consensual rape?
Now it gets even worse. That doesn't even exist, and Wheeljack is acting like a broken individual who needs HELP, instead of whining and acting like a literally butthurt idiot. When men get raped, it is a source of shame, worse than women, because where women are raped for their beauty and reproductive power, men are raped for worse things.
This is supposed to be PTSD? Complex character analysis? Bitch, you be fooling nobody. This isn't even remotely possible and Starscream honestly has better things to do than go the Prophet and rape everybody. How does robot rape even work, anyways? It wouldn't but screw that: I'm writing a true-to-life rape story! Woo hoo!
These stories are worse than Mary-Sue stories because the authors are so delusional that they think they're somehow better because they don't have Mary-Sues. Yet Mary-Sues can be laughed at; this can't.
Of course later Wheeljack will find his one true love and they'll have wondersex and all that stuff because who needs explanations or characters acting like themselves? Fuck you, I'm not a Suethor! But I'm a rape author and that's better! :D
Everybody needs to stop pitying Wheeljack and actually DO something. This reads like one of those God-awful depressing feminist novels where the heroine was raped and all she does is expect people everywhere all the time to feel bad for her. Well IRL, anybody who'd get the chance would kill their rapist. Nothing's stopping Wheeljack. But no. He just secretly enjoyed that stuff. What a sick fuck.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
Yeah, Wheeljack! Go tell Optimus you were raped for no reason except for a cliche! Go on, tell him! And tell him you're still being whiny and like a chick instead of going gun-ho and killing your rapist!
What, is he going to go to court and get SS in jail? It doesn't work that way. Spark-rape, what a wonder to come out of the vaginas of fangirls everywhere. I mean, it just couldn't happen any other way. It looks like rape and homosexuality are one in the same nowadays. How insensitive. Here people call me a hater.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
Wow, Wheeljack is blaming HIMSELF for the rape. Not even feminists approve of that shit.
But this I find most amusing:
"Things I dislike: Mary Sues (especially OFCs whose sole purpose is to be the love interest of the author's favorite canon character), characters behaving wildly out-of-character, mpreg, sparkling fluff fics, crossovers, healing sexxors, TFs turned into humans and/or genderswapped, and pretty much every other tired fanfic cliche you can name. I do however enjoy reading fics that put a fresh spin on an old cliche or feature an OC that is NOT a Sue - check out my favorites list for some excellent examples.
Things I love: Canon-faithful fics, unusual but plausible pairings, subtle characterization, accurate psychology, angst and romance."
This isn't even canon faithful, you stupid bitch. You don't like Mary-Sues yet approve of slash, which pretty much shits all over canon and their characterization. You say that you hate cliches? Well this IS a cliche. It's your standard rape fic and is about as deep as Bioware is visionary. Wheeljack IS behaving out of character and now he's acting like a WOMAN and saying that it is his FAULT that he was raped. Why did Starscream rape him? No reason except for the Mary-Sue idea that it's meant to be tragic. Why do all villains need to rape? We don't know, but fuck them they're men. Why are these characters homosexual? Because it's hot, and fuck you.
You really think Wheeljack would just sit there and let Starscream rape him? Even women or men who are nearly dead fight back with all they have. But Wheeljack just let it happen like he was Starscream's bitch. Oh, and I said this before: Cybertronians don't even NEED to rape. Plus, when you mention 'plug 'n' play' it really shows how much of a sick fuck you are.
It takes a fucked up person to sit down and write this shit, and get praise and love for it, and worse, you think that it's original!
You're not canon faithful. You're acting like a slash fanwhore. And no matter how much hate I get, this needs to be flamed and rightly so. Nothing pisses me off more than a sick fuck who thinks she's better than Suethors and better than those cliches. You're a pornthor - all you write is porn. Your headcanon is NOT canon, and it seems you're tooting your own horn way too loud.
In short: Wheeljack is acting like a WOMAN. He needs to shut up and realize that immobilized or not, you need to fight back. Since he didn't, I have no pity for him. But also with the gay rape we have every other character a giggly faggot, because fuck real characterizations and the fact that their species HAS NO CONCEPT OF SEXUAL ORIENTATION. Logic. It fucking applies here.
Am I swearing too much? Good. I have very little patience or tolerance for people who think normalizing rape and thinking they're not like /other/ fans deserve a nice place in the Gulag. You enjoy rape? Get out of America.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
You call this 'canon faithful'? Go fuck yourself with a railroad spike, you rape loving whore. It looks like homosexual rape is always prevalent with these stories, and I always have a bone to pick with every one of them.
Why the fuck would Starscream even need to rape Wheeljack? Because no villain can be evil without raping someone, you know. What an amazing thing to start off a rape story with a rape scene RIGHT IN THE BEGINNING. You know women: they love rape. Makes me wonder why they make such a big deal out of it.
Why the fuck are these characters even gay to begin with? They don't even have a gender nor do they have the animalistic needs of rape. That's what rape is: it is an animalistic desire to conquer and subjugate. It is a brutal, harrowing and God-awful experience and when I see authors like you glorify it and makes a homosexual ensemble out of it it makes me want to call for a damn nuclear strike. Good to know Wheeljack didn't even bother to fight back; he must've been asking for it.
But you know what? I don't give two shits whether this isn't your normal 'rape fic'. Rape is rape. And you WILL be flamed, rape lover.
| LunarShadowAngel chapter 13 . 5/29/2014
Wow...so intense...poor Wheeljack.
I actually teared up reading this chapter. :(
| Zanza Flux chapter 33 . 3/12/2014
Wow, this story was really good. I couldn't put it down. I just had to see what happened next and how Wheeljack would deal with everything. It hurt to see him in so much pain, but by the end he began working things out and I loved that.
I love unusual pairings, especially with characters that aren't used often. Trailbreaker was such a sweetspark. You made these two work so well. Thank you for writing this wonderful story.
| Foureyed-Pufferfish chapter 33 . 12/1/2013
I absolutely adore this story. And at the same time I utterly hate it. I hate it because it has ruined me. I’m now addicted to this pairing and I can’t find it anywhere! I’ve searched and searched and this is pretty much the only Wheeljack/Trailbreaker out there. Why did you have to do this? You made such an amazing story that made me fall in love with a pairing I never considered and with characters that I’ve never really had much of an interest in. This whole story is brilliantly written and thought out. I love getting a glimpse into what happened between the G1 episodes and how well you’ve incorporated their plots. I want more so badly it’s physically painful.
| BossBot97 chapter 33 . 8/28/2013
Just letting you know we the readers still like this.
I ship Ratch/Jackie so hard, I was furious when I realized you kept him with TB. But you pulled it off. I still don't ship them, but that fact does not diminish your story at all.
Well done, and don't stop writing.
| Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 33 . 7/28/2013
Well executed, and very believable.
Keep up the good work!