Reviews for Dearly Departed
GAbbyIsLove chapter 4 . 7/12/2009
I cried, again. :'(

Favorite quotes:

'But Abby wasn’t going to last much longer. He knew it. She knew it. As much as he wanted to believe everything would work its self out, he knew this was it. He had to give her what she wanted.

Just like he always did.'

'"I love you…so much, Abby," he barely whispered into her ear.'

You really know how to pull the heart strings.

It's really scary because I can seriously see this in an episode. I mean it, I would take it as far as to present it to the producers or something.

Of course, they realize that they love each other when it's just too late...

Fantastic work, bravo!

Sorry this is so long!

Looking forward to the last update! (But I am dreading it as well)
STLFAN chapter 4 . 7/12/2009
Another tear jerking update. Beautifully written. I still have hope.
Elizabeth Perry chapter 4 . 7/12/2009
I can't even type I'm crying so much... so sad, more please.
ZombieMonkey chapter 4 . 7/12/2009
I hate when grown ex-Marine men cry, it makes me cry *sobs with Gibbs* I love this story so much even though I think I know where you're going with this...
GAbbyIsLove chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
So sad...

I cried when he sang for her. I listened to the song, wonderful choice

I can imagine this happening in the show, if it did, I'm sure the last thing Abby would want to hear before she died would be Gibbs singing for her.

It would make a very good episode, not one that I would want to see, but a good one.

I love how you keep incorporating the deer into each chapter.

Write soon
lunarmoth131 chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
I am eager to find out what will happen next! Very intriguing!
Abby chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
very nice story

i like it a lot!

just wanted to let you know that please in sign language is a flat palm in a circle not a fist, a fist is sorry

AMAZING JOB SO FAR!
ZombieMonkey chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
I can't even read that song without crying! It's just so sad and meaningful. nice touch with the mother deer though, she knows what to do hopefully. Great job!
Grace OMaille chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
very good.. even if it made me cry ;~)
STLFAN chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
Very emotional. I cried. Love the song. My thoughts on the outcome are still in tact. ;)
writerobsessed4936 chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
Such a sad story so far! Please continue!
Elizabeth Perry chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
How sad! I'm on the edge of my seat, can't wait for the next one.
SexyScottishDoc chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
you're gonna make me cry...I already feel the tears start to form. hopefully they'll get rescued! please post the next chapter soon!
Berlian chapter 2 . 7/11/2009
kind of wary to read it cause the title seem so...

but it's great start for gabby story.. Hope Gibbs and Abby will be okay..
Phoebe097 chapter 2 . 7/10/2009
AH! I know what the title is but I can't stand the thought of *shivers* dead Abby!

Also, great chapter! Loved the descriptive detail even though it was kinda gross, but I don't really care about blood and crashes and gore so five out of five stars!

update soon please!
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