|Reviews for Butterflies and Hurricanes|
| Leylaniez chapter 15 . 2/9
Wow, this is one of the greatest fan fictions I've ever read. I really like your characterization of Scorpius and how you tied together all the history between the Malfoys and the Weasleys/Potters. Most Fan Fictions either ignore that or gloss over it, but I like how you incorporated into your story. Every character was so 3 dimensional too, and all the conversations just flowed so naturally. I think you have a real talent for writing and look forward to reading the rest of your work.
| annabell chapter 15 . 12/6/2013
I 'am really in love with this fan fiction! am waiting to continue.
so amazed by you thanks I loved it.
| Cheyenne chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
What nono not happin good great but no no
| Highlights123 chapter 7 . 11/21/2013
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/31/2013
I am dying! Rip my heart! WHY did it have to end?!
Right a sequel about their seventh year
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/25/2013
Rip my heart out now! One of the BEST fan fictions ever! Why did it have to end!?
| sunshineself chapter 15 . 9/19/2013
This story is amazing! I read the whole thing in a couple of days because I just couldn't stop! I really like your take on Scorpius and Rose because it seems very believable! I've seen a lot of fics where Scorp is amazingly wonderful and a Gryffindor, and him and Rose are best friends, and similar plots that just seemed so unlikely to me, so I really liked how you gave Scorpius a very likely Malfoy past and a darkness while showing that he changed. I also really like how your stories connect to each other and there are other things going on in the wizarding world outside of the characters! It makes everything so much more believable! Please keep writing! :)
| PF2724 chapter 10 . 9/18/2013
| CurlyFries01 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Wow, i read the line,. "Everything about you resonates happiness, now I won't settle for less." and i was like, that's a line in a song! it sounds vaguely familiar! so I googled it, and found out that its Bliss, by Muse! and that's when i remembered that Butterflies and Hurricanes is also a song by Muse! I love Muse, they are one of my favourite bands, and i'm super excited to be seeing them live in December!
Anyway, I really like the story so far. :) Keep up the good work! :)
| Imaginneeee chapter 15 . 7/31/2013
I love this. It's been so long since I've read a decent ScoRose fic. This was so cute and fluffy and I LOVED IT. Thanks for writing it.
| Leyla chapter 8 . 7/23/2013
The Fat Lady always has to ruin the mood.
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/14/2013
Please write a sequel!
This was really good!
| WhenBirdsFly chapter 15 . 7/6/2013
I really enjoyed this story. I liked how their was a deeper story than just romance.
| owlgirlie387 chapter 15 . 6/21/2013
Fantastic story overall, very well written! I love your characterizations of Scorpius and (for the most part) Rose, although she seems to alternate between naïveté and experience/knowledge, which can be a bit confusing at times. I thought the plot line was very interesting, and I like how you took a fairly minor character in the original books and made him quite important in the evil aspect of the story (I'm taking about Rabastan Lestrange). A few quick things I thought you should be aware of: a) The use if the word "thorax". Since we're not talking about ants or grasshoppers, it'd be better if you used abdomen, torso, waist, or even middle to talk about a person's upper body. b) The use of the phrase "poor smile". I can see where you'd get this, but it can be kind of awkward wording at times. The meaning is kind of hard to discern from it. You'd be better off describing what I understand you to be talking about as "a sorry excuse for a smile" or something of the like. c) Petite. Generally, when you are describing a person of small stature, you'd spell the word with an "e" on the end. If you were talking about a small desert, then spelling it "petit" is perfectly acceptable. Finally, as far as my research and knowledge goes, muggleborns can not be sorted into Slytherin, as this would be against the principles laid down by Salazar Slytherin. Again, I loved the story, and these things I found are suggestions, not orders so take them only as seriously as you believe is needed. I really hope this helps you in the future, and if you don't mind me asking, where are you originally from? You mention that English isn't your first language quite a bit, so I was wondering what is.
Thank you for your writing, and all the best,
P.S. Please don't give up on the sequel! :)
| HollyVanDerBerg chapter 15 . 6/1/2013
I loved this story! I wish you'd update the sequel! :)