Reviews for Amu's 5th egg
sara chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I think that you should make it animated.
Ayame-knight chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
I love the 5 chara she so funny and i love that ending too
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
plz update soon thxs
Anime lover0331 chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
I get it but...it should be longer, my responce to the ending was
ballet fairy chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
cute! I really like otuki :)
black neko hime chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
lol.

cute
Cg2nenetwin chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
this was just way too fast! but it was good! Nene:Nene likes so Cg2 likes it too! Cg2:Nene!
Ren'aiXhakumei chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
“Ran, We’re in love!” She said

“yippee. I’m going back to bed. Good night”

Omfg XD hehe. Rans like ''we know that, now i'm off to sleep!''

It's funny how her name chara, Otuki is Ikuto backwards XD And that Otuki is like ''so your the one delaying my appearance!'' To Tadagay XD Damn straight!
Angel Kiss Hikari chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
...Okay?

This was... I'm sorry... Sort of stupid.
AnimeLovaXD chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I can't wait for the fifth egg Please write the next chapter soon:D
Angel Kiss Hikari chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
The idea is good, but I don't really like how you wrote it...

It goes from one event to another, and you also don't use commas... Like, when Ikuto said 'ILOVE HER FATHER', maybe you should have written: 'I LOVE HER, FATHER'. Because now it sounded like he said that he loved Amu's father.

And, what is Aruto doing in there?

Isn't Kazuomi (or whatever his name is) be the one controlling Ikuto?

Oh, and at a certain moment the " became very weird... (I don't know what they're called)

So, I hope the next chapter will be better...
black neko hime chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
well it is now obvious that Amu's heart lies with Ikuto.

:)

This new chara will be interesting!
OhmyBelle chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Love it, though try putting a bit more detail...

Update soon :D
Helapayne chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Cool! I want to know!

I found he ending a little confusing, I couldn't figure out who was speaking.