|Reviews for The Rise of Afro Samurai|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Hi :) As a disclaimer, I'm not familiar with your fandom, but this has some really striking imagery and was a very good read. I did note that you don't take a new line when a new character speaks (which is standard for English creative writing), and there were a few grammar and punctuation errors that made this a little more difficult to read than it perhaps should have been. A beta reader or a really thorough workover might help. Good luck x
| Helium Apocalypse chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
This was great but I'd just like to say you might want to edit the title because it was a bit misleading.
| Kakuzu's5thHeart chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Good! Good! This was a wonderful idea for a Fanfic based off of Afro Samurai, wonderfly orginal! There were few things that I spotted: Format. Please start a new line each time a new person speaks, it helps your readers know who's talking. You have the whole story as one paragraph, you might want to have multible paragraphs so that it dosn't look over whelming to your readers eye. Starting a new line everytime a different person talks will help with this. Also you wrote: "Is this really how my path end,” as Afro's soul began to going back and trying this: Is this really how my path is to end,”Afro though as his soul began to ascend. It might make more sence. Other then that it was a great story, I'm glad some one wrote a fanfic for it! Maybe you'll start a fad! Nice Job!
| Afro7hundr chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
That's a big brick you have there.