|Reviews for Smoldering|
| BlackWolf202 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Wow... just; wow! Lolz i loved it but there are no other words to describe this other then WOW! :D
| narutoluvr4evr chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
...Wow. Hot stuff. I like the emotions that you weaved in at the beginning too. Nice work!
| 666snoopy chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
That was very hot. haha, Kakashi catching them was funny. Great job!
| Ruka-x3 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
You are amazing!
This story is just one of your many masterpieces ]
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Nice story, Shikamaru is dead! Wah!
| 5Angel chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Bwah you almost fried my brain :P shucks that was hoott and snuggly and fraught with so much!
Yikes bring on SasuNaru day everyday lol
Lourrve! Muchas gracias :)
| XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
This story is absolutely amazing! I bow to your freaking awsome skills! Can't wait to read more!~
| evanescenceangel18 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Hahahahaha my dear Acherona this was an amazing story! Wow Naruto and Sasuke really must be expositionist I mean they did it and Kakashi's desk and on a hospital bed! You killed Shika why would you kill him? Anyways loved this amazing story. Love you dear. XD
| kai chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
makes you take a long look at your life and sigh in defeat,excepting things you wish you had done in the past or didnt learned cant be altered once theyve already happened and you cant take back words it just isnt me with i had never run away from some of my problems
| Lover Of Grell chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Awesome! I can't think of another word to describe this fic. It had everything. I was a bit worried in the beginning and then I cried for Shikamaru, I fangirled and nosebled at the lemon and laughed at the ending. It's perfect I hope you will write more stories, just like this one.
| purropolisprincess chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
this was really good
| Ai Enmaxjigoku shoujo chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
That was... awesome! So well written! Your writing style is awesome! I loved it - it was so interesting!
| 24sakura chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Hot and very sweet! Thanks!
| Mirenai-chan chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
OMG I love your stories so much and this one was truly perfect -
Hope you will update your other fics soon, I really like your stories about Naruto and the Uchiha brothers :D
| yaoihime22 chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
i was reading this story while listening to fly me to the moon song man i was crying in the first part and that lemon was so hot i was bright red from it . great work ...