Reviews for The Rinnegan, A Fault in a God's Plan
Blitzstrahl chapter 4 . 4/9
Exactly a truly well written Hiruzen should feel like Dumbledore. A pragmatic well meaning, but horribly misguided manipulative leader.
Shadowpawzzz chapter 9 . 11/4/2015
Uggg, I've been reading alot of your storys and sadly you never finish them. You start off strong and then just quit. I hope your not dead...
Guest chapter 9 . 9/11/2015
Warn your readers that you will have OC's before they even read this fic, they're a turn off for a reason.
sword45114 chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
Very good story nice development good explaining nice way to keep it cool definitely 10/10
fusioninferno chapter 9 . 5/11/2015
Really love this story. To bad it hasn't been updated in awhile. Anywho, just wanted to let you know that you have a great fic.
Jesseblackhawk chapter 9 . 8/28/2014
Honestly this is a good story but i really want someone to use sarutobis corpse to smash his own face off the mountain .seriously im still mad he forced rin to leave after adopting naruto that just seems unforgivable no matter how you look at it
dilbag36 chapter 9 . 3/28/2014
WTF man is this when the any storyline new in these stories the writer stop the story is this man seriously if you're not posting then don't get fans hopes high for an individualy interesting story.
guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
no offense but I always imagined rin liking naruto even though shes dead
Narutofan8696 chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
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DarthRexPoke44 chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
Saying grace! Your putting christianity into the wrong freaking culture.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/6/2013
I know that most authurs dont like these messages that they cant respond too, but Im no writer and feel I dont need a account. Anyways, I like this story, however I would like to see Kyuubi getting in on this soon, something unique, like a kind teacher guide dude or, ah, "lady" (if theres gonna be any 'lemonade' ) that is guiding him to a bloodthirsty path thats Brutal, but still 'good'. Also could he get a summoning contract, additional bloodlines, or a pet, or something? just a couple suggestions that I feel I must make sure you consider.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2013
hellfire45 chapter 9 . 8/26/2013
Good make more chapters
Ayody16 chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
it'll be nice if you like cook up a way to transfer teru to naruto's team (vice versa) and starting a love relationship to brighten the story, its just a suggestion but an interesting one at that cos it brings in more points like them training together, love sense, humor and the rest, i hope you do consider ma suggestions
Guest chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
You know what the third hokage in this story is heartless always caring about the village!
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