Reviews for In This Together
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I loved this. Peter is so sweet to look out for her, especially when she had been fighting her memories and thoughts.
random individual chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Me like.
Bymaga Jones chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
You have some nicely lyrical moments in this ("the scarlet of her blouse a bright patch against the grey day" for example), and I particularly enjoyed your attention to detail, showing us so much in their seemingly simple gestures. You did a great job at giving us a really nice moment between Peter and Olivia.
wjobsessed chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I am curious if you were thinking of their conversation on the bench in episode 2 when you wrote this, because it reminds me of that. The location, the tone, the touch, Peter's desire to help her. So many nice parallels.

Two things I love:

"Crazy and functioning are not mutaully exclusive." Sounds very Peter canon. :)

"Then we figure out what to do next. We take this one step at a time." Love the "we."
Ackerman chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I've never thought of Olivia that way before. I like how Peter suspects that Walter's altered him too or is in some way responsible for his 'missing years.' I really like your take on Olivia, I think it's very realistic.
Mr Super Czar chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I got chills. This is beautiful.