The older males name is Shadow the hedgehog :-) :-) :-)

1) It didn't stop at just one punch. Using his speed, Sonic literally punched and kicked Knuckles all across the hallway. Needless to say, Knuckles did not look pretty.

- O_O Damn...

2) The other students, who had pressed up against walls to avoid being hit by the projectile that was Knuckles, were in shock. The same thought went through all their minds: 'Do not piss him off.'

- Yes. Do NOT piss him off

Who would have expected to find a Chaos Emerald in that room?

Speedy the neutral Speed Chao. I can see that.

AWWW! -w-

Poor Sonic...

It's Shadow, of course! And I like Sonic with 2 completely different colored eyes!

Hey if you discountined this couse you ran out of ideas then I could give you some more

Tails: you can do that tails pedants abandon him couse of his twin tails and he is currently being made fun of and beat up by Bullys who think he is a freak and sonic saves him calls tails a little brother or something and shadow pitying the young fox and sees that sonic and tails will have a close friendship takes him in

Cream and Cheese: they meet becouse celream and cheese were In trouble by some people who knew her mom and and hated her. So these people were gonna kidnap and. Beat up her daughter and her daughters chao

Espio: they meet up in school when sonic comes back and Espio stands up for sonic Espio also has mismatched eyes one purple one blue sonic him and tails become best friends and devolope a close bond

i think its Shadow

AWWWW I liked this story (pouts)

IZZ SHADOOWW! i love love love it so far and it just started!

Hi there. Author's notes are not allowed to be posted as chapters. I know you're upset about no sex scenes being allowed in stories. Heck, even I wish it were allowed, but unfortunately it isn't and the site isn't going to change their rules. That is why they have . I suggest you take this down and post it on your page instead.

Btw, it's also against the rules to post duplicate chapters. You're honestly just making your account a target for the admins.

Just in case you wonder later, Critics United was not involved in the purge of MA fics.

Signed,

DarkSacredJewelXoX

[Founder of Critics United]

i liked the chapters from the beggining to the the part of 4 year old mind set sonic,after that the story became happened?can you make the story make sence,i thought this was suppose to be a family/comfort story,where did the lycanthropes come from,shadow is man made after all,keep that in a kinder note you have a very good writing style and have good ideas,just make sure they fit into your story,o.k.?

You just put this story in danger; chapters that are only notes with no story material aren't allowed. I won't be reporting this but someone else might.

I think freedom of writing is important yet at the same time some of the fics with lemon and violence in are beyond horrible and do need to be taken down. And I don't mean terrible spelling or grammar, but I mean in the fact that some fics could actually leave people mentally scared. I've read a few fics, that had no warning of what I was about to read, and I literally had to close the lid of my laptop (though mostly because it was at that moment that my internet decided to crash as I was pressing the back button -_-)

But yes, I don't mean get rid of the stories that have a real plot and all that, but the stories that abuse the characters just to fill out some sick fantasy that the author has.