Reviews for Family |
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![]() ![]() R u going to update soon or r u done with this story? Let me no |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my fav stories I hope you countinue it soon! I feel bad for sonic I hope his dad finds him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG you are the best! I adore your story about werepuppy shads and its a shame. i like how he got his sight bk , collar off , and hits were-san! (shadow is the best character eva no matter wat anbdy says!)Any way i love YOU . this story is rrreeeeeeaaaaaallllllllllyyyy gd and i was HORRIFIED when sonic lost his soul buti like the idea of the lyrtho thingie But has sonic got his memory back for good now? plse dnt let anythin happin 2 him! I LOVE YOU!From Tiffy XX |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read all twelve chapters, and this is truly an amazing story. The way you wrote the Lycan parts were very interesting, too. Although having Shadow mindlessly killing almost everyone in the city was NOT a good idea. XD Woo, that will have him famous with the police, I'm sure. The only real thing I had with this chapter(s) was the whole amnesia, four-year-old part. And then you made him remember, then forget, then remember again... Yeah, just a pet peeve of mine. ; Honestly, I was surprised I didn't find this earlier. I will now check out your other stories. ~Kharma :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story just keeps getting better. Keep up the good writing. and i just realized something. My OC character has a close appearance to the Sonic in this story. here, gallery/#/d2kesrs have a look. its just an idea but if you want to use her, be my guest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!SONIC GO BACK NOW BEFOR YOU GET HURT!AND ALSO AWSUME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!TAILS DOLL!*SHOOTS AT HIM WITH DESERT EAGLE*AHHHHH!OMG SONIC IS SOULLESS!AND HS NO MEMORIY!NOOOOOOO!POOR SONIC AND SHADS |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow fleetway super sonic looks crazed!hey do you know if sonic has a purple for with white stripes on his forhead?good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww wow my friend drew a sonic chaos last year and named him speedy cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!I BET HE USED CHAOS CONTEROL!I GET A COOKIE AGAIN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i knew it i get a cookie!:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i dont mind that you made sonic have red and grean eyes and also i get a vitual cookie the stranger is shadow!and good start i love it cant wait to read more |
![]() ![]() are you going to update soon |
![]() ![]() hey i loved the story and i hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! You have returned! D I understand the whole writer's block thing completely, so it's cool. This chapter was long but I loved it! Keep it up! *thumbs up* |