Reviews for Family
Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
Whoo this chapter was awesome! Really cool XD Hope you continue soon! I AM SONIC HEAR ME RAWR! I have no idea why I just said that...
lollipop pump chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
Wow, this chapter was deep. I loved it. Good emotion to this chapter. Keep it up!
jorenmartijn chapter 9 . 8/26/2009
Great chapter yet again!

I particulary had to laugh about the part where Sonic was chased by the wasps, because I am also writing story where that has happened, but with Tails.

Coincidentally, I've also been trying to build a father/son relation between Sonic and Shadow in that story, though they aren't related. :)

Anyway, when I said the last chapter's ending was a bit mushy, I didn't mean it in a really negative way. This chapter cleared up why that was, and it worked very well. :)

Also, the Chaos Emerald was a great idea. I'm interested to see what you're going to do with it!

Can't wait for the next chapter!


Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 9 . 8/26/2009
LOL Awesome chapter! let's see, what would Shadow look like with pink streaks... O_o lol anyway ah getting chased by wasps that brings back memories unfortunatly mine were hornets which hurt worse when they stung you then wasps, That was one of the worst days of my life...
KeizerGodzilla chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
You could have sonic go super Sonic and defeat some villian,like eggman,or you know,anyone,Knuckles would be a cool enemy.
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
the chapter may have been lacking content, but somehow it gets more interesting with each update.

Keep updating!
lollipop pump chapter 9 . 8/25/2009
Ah, yes, another great chapter. I wonder what other things Sonic will find about his past. Keep up the good work! And don't worry, I know how it is. Writer's block is a pain, and school is back. Blah. Oh, well, I'll be patient for your next chapter. )
jorenmartijn chapter 8 . 8/19/2009
Great chapter! It had some funny moments and I love the bonding between Shadow and Sonic.

That bit where they both grieve was touching, but edges a little to... mushy.

I just don't really see this version of Sonic as one to accept hugging that quickly.

By the way, you said Sonic's mom died in a fire, but I happen to recall her having died from a rare kind of cancer or something a few chapters back. Is it just me or did I read incorrectly?

Anyway, keep up the good work!
Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 8 . 8/18/2009
:( Poor Sonic and Shadow, but I have a question, if Shadow went back to the house and saw it had been destroyed, why didn't he go and get Sonic? Sorry if this was already answered but I just can't remember *Blushes*
lollipop pump chapter 8 . 8/18/2009
Aww, this chapter so much father and son relationship right here. I liked this chapter. Keep up the good work! D
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 8 . 8/18/2009
damn straight, Shadow BETTER catch Sonic before another 'accident'... or Chuck Norris might have a word and a roundhouse kick or two to give Shadow.

The chapters are getting better 4 sure

Keep writing!
HyperShanic01 chapter 7 . 8/15/2009
Bring in the chilidogs! Nom. :3

Anyway, omg, shadows ninja. that itself is a feat. and hooray for lion king!
HyperShanic01 chapter 6 . 8/15/2009
... damn, now i must draw this. so i will, though it might take some time. Concussion o.o
KeizerGodzilla chapter 7 . 8/13/2009
Ok,I have an issue to discuss,first off,I hate yaoi,i hate faggots,I hate gays completely,you want to know why,they don't love each other,theyre just looking for something to get rid of their sexual antics withe they probably had a screwed up child hood,they need to keep it in the closent,not be proud of it,its out of humanly order,its sick,its wrong,its disgusting,men were made to be with women,not women with women,not men with men,its sick,all you freaks know it,I have no idea what the heck is wrong with you to think its "ok".that is what i think,its my opinion,no one will change,not fangirls,not fanboys,NOT YOU,Im sick of fags being accepted in society.
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
mm that was interesting.

at least Shadow let up on the child abuse... he didn't want Chuck Norris and Social Services coming to his front door, huh?
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