Reviews for Family
Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
hehe I can't wait for the next chap! Lol Lion king? I do that sometimes I was writing this romance story right when this song came on, boy did I wish that you can put music with the stories right then, I mean it went so well with the topic lol.

BTW OMG 20 chilidogs? Got I can't imagine ugh *shivers* lol I mean that could tear someone up haha
lollipop pump chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
Another great chapter )
Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 6 . 8/10/2009
yay I was waiting for this - AW man it sucks that I can't draw very good, I would draw the bed scene where Sonic's hand is cluching Shadow's arms ah well T_T

Well I can draw a little bit, I can draw all the hedgehogs it's just hands, and feet, and backgrounds all that crap *sigh* all well... CONTINUE SOON!
KeizerGodzilla chapter 6 . 8/10/2009
Good job,you've really added a homie feeling to this story,one of the things I like about it is that it defies all the yaoi fans out there but mostly it keeps an innocent point of view,Like an old classic movie.
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 6 . 8/9/2009

Lol, seriously... the part where Sonic gets injured was kinda sudden, but... that's how most accidents are, right?

interesting chapter. Looking forward to another update.

Keep writing!
HyperShanic01 chapter 5 . 8/7/2009
Yayz, dual eye colored sonic decided to stay with shadow. The family bond. :D
Wheee man chapter 5 . 8/5/2009
This chappie was really really really predictable. Like doesnt this happen in all of stories like this? Anyways who cares! This story pwns! Nice jobby job! I always thought it was nice for Shadow to be Sonic's dad but sorry to break it to ya I like Sonic's original dad more.
Double Winks and a Pistol chapter 5 . 7/26/2009
HOlY CRAP! You HAVE to continue soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! lol I couldn't help but laugh when Shadow said "Watch your language!" Lol continue soon!
Simone Robinson chapter 5 . 7/26/2009
Awesome chapters, update asap!
lollipop pump chapter 5 . 7/25/2009
This fic is awesome. Oh, please continue! I'll review every new chapter! I want to see what happens next! )
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 5 . 7/25/2009
too short! I like it, though, keep writing!
Genesis.BlazingShadow chapter 4 . 7/20/2009
jorenmartijn chapter 4 . 7/20/2009
Mayor improvements with every chapter! Very well done!

I'm interested to see how everything plays out from now. :)

There's not a lot of Shadow and Sonic father/son relation fics out there that are good, but yours and Truth, Lies and Secret Families from Pokelad really stand out from the mass.

Anyway, this chapter seemed to be just right in length, however I do hate cliffhangers alot, since they leave me wondering what happens next. :( Just don't wait too long with updating. :P


HyperShanic01 chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
more virtual cookies! lol. i should stop reviewing in the dark, it first came out like this: ,pre botial vpploes
Simone Robinson chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
Chaos Control? lol, I dunno. Anyways, great that you updated, hope you update again soon _* btw- would you mind checkin out my sonic fic plz, the link to my other account is on my profile. thanks
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