Reviews for Oretachi no Sadame
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Shit, completely shit, what the fuck the OC is a a cheap imitation of Naruko from other Fics and Naruto is still an naive fool when he was being mentored by the Kyuubi RETARDED MUCH - CANNON NARU SUCKS
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 10/27/2013
just ruined it, really why does the girl always end up a half-demon aswell? so fucking annoying
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 10/27/2013
umm, what happened to Naruto's inhuman stamina? and i think you are over powering your OC, it always seems to happen. ppl seem to always op there oc's
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
shiity
Guest chapter 8 . 6/18/2013
like you should know by now romping is basically another word for sex
VERO ASSASSIN FOR SHINIGAMI chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
holy crap i laughed so hard at this i love it!
baka36411 chapter 25 . 2/11/2013
Im so sorry about your dad! please dont feel the need to rush yourself, but i would really appresiate it if you could try writing again. Im sorry if you are still hurting and i lve your story (just so you know :) )
DeadBottle chapter 25 . 12/9/2012
one of the greatest fanfic i've ever read
S.R.457 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
nice 1st ch 8/10
uchiha isuke chapter 8 . 3/3/2012
romping means playing of some kind

as in asking your girlfriend if she up for a quick romp so it was just the wrong choice of words to use
haye2 chapter 15 . 1/12/2012
hikari didn't say anything to narutoat all while he was yelling and stuffso i guess she should have heart him bu didn't want to rely
L chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
I'm sorry for your loss
templar627 chapter 2 . 7/9/2011
The kanji isn't toad, its oil.
Elemental Dragon Swordman chapter 25 . 5/22/2011
Nice update and sorry about your father.
Goldrune09 chapter 15 . 4/16/2011
wtf? you fucking bastard! ok...so you DID bring hikari back to naruto but why the FUCKING HELL did you have orochimaru rape the poor defenseless blind girl? asshole.

It's still a so-so story though.
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