|Reviews for Indomitable|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/1
I’m just disgusted.
| TrumpasaurusRex chapter 6 . 9/12
"Exactly. A shadow clone is supposed to be a perfect copy of you, but it's hard to actually copy everything. If you only make one or two at a time it's easy to copy all your combat skills, and that's all that matters in a fight. But if I make twenty clones at once they're each going to know maybe half my techniques, and they're a little on the slow side mentally. By the time we get up into the hundreds I'm making idiots with one good technique each, which means they need a lot of supervision.“
The level of nerfing is unreal.
Shadow clones don’t work this way. They’re perfect clones. They know everything their user does. No matter the number.
| TrumpasaurusRex chapter 3 . 9/12
"Of course, it didn't work out like I'd hoped. I thought since my chakra is so huge I might be able to get around the usual limit on using elements you don't have an affinity for, but no such luck. I can do low-level techniques from all five elements, as long as I don't mind burning a ton of chakra. But I can't convert chakra to elemental form fast enough to make high-level techniques practical for anything but air."
I always hated how MCs in Naruto fics get nerfed in this manner.
Meanwhile, Hiruzen, Itachi, Sasuke, Kakashi, and many others can spam high jutsus of all elements ignoring their chakra nature.
At a certain point, chakra nature gets ignored.
| TrumpasaurusRex chapter 1 . 9/11
"Use too much and it will poison you, little fool. Human bodies aren't made to channel youki. You've only survived this long because of your little healing talent, and it has its limits."
"Yeah, what's up with that, anyway? I always wondered if it was something you were doing, or if I had some kind of bloodline power."
"Of course it's a bloodline, idiot. A remnant of the perfect health of the elder kami, in fact. No doubt some distance ancestor of yours was one of their playthings."
The fox chuckled. "You should be grateful, brat. Without that power my youki would have burned you to ash the first time you called on it. As it is most of your power is consumed merely surviving the contamination that leaks through the seal."
These older fics always have that cringe youki nonsense.
| Kagega chapter 12 . 9/9
A fantastic story that died too soon.
| Sypho Dias chapter 12 . 7/16
bruh... you left it here? seriously? God man... why must the great fics always end abruptly...
| Sypho Dias chapter 10 . 7/16
I'm really starting to hate sakura... but well it's not like I didn't hate her in the first place so I suppose nothing has changed.
| OkBoomer147 chapter 12 . 7/13
Oh man what a place to stop!
Really amazing work mate!
| chaoswizard chapter 12 . 5/15
Keep it coming please it is good please
| kevinthegoat0304 chapter 1 . 12/4/2022
Naruto won’t be able to learn medical techniques, like ever. His chakra control won’t ever be good enough for that with Kuramas chakra making his a tiny bit unstable.
| kevinthegoat0304 chapter 1 . 12/4/2022
Before I begin to read this fic, Jiraiya is extremely smart. Don’t know why you think he dumb. It’s called an act.
| Aedwards179 chapter 1 . 9/19/2022
you said in the beginning Naruto didn't need a strong bloodline to be god like. and you give him a bloodline that can heal anything that isn't lethal? you're kind contradicting yourself
| EVIL-SAGE chapter 12 . 8/13/2022
i really like this story pls continue, and please no narusaku
| Chronic-Insomnia chapter 12 . 8/8/2022
Naruto has been set up as this all-knowing, constantly multiplying, unrelenting entity that spreads his tendrils throughout the nations in sleeper agents until no one can hide... But he's had pretty terrible intelligence. Most of his screen time is passively waiting for people to mess with him and then reacting.
He talks about eliminating people, but we don't actually get any scenes where he's actively attempting to get rid of Hiashi or Danzo or even hunting the Akatsuki or Orochimaru. And his attempts at zerging his problems in unending chakra have been almost laughable given his resources.
| Josher chapter 12 . 7/13/2022
Shame this didn’t continue. Good and interesting story. Yeah, it has OP Naruto, does so,e creative stuff though.