Reviews for Indomitable
Hadrian von Eveschatten chapter 2 . 11/24
Holy shit. Naruto achieving such mastery with Shadow/Blood Clones to keep many copies of different forms fully operational at all times and across vast distances is always truly awesome to see.
TenchiSolutionsForAll chapter 10 . 9/30
I check back on this every once in a while, hoping that I've missed a notification that Shaper's come back to fanfiction and specifically this story. Alas, I am doomed to disappointment. Such a shame that a story with this promising of a start will go unfinished.
Sivaatasi chapter 12 . 4/25
Truly is a shame that this story is dead.
Bluenait chapter 1 . 2/8
...where is he better?ß or not a Fucking Moron hes still a stupid beta bitch cuck dumass fuck your trash fic
Guest chapter 10 . 1/31
Massive. Overdeveloped.
Illuminated chapter 5 . 1/20
When Anko made her strapon joke, it would have been funny if she had cut her thumb and made to cast “Summoning jutsu!: giant black dil-“ before being hastily interrupted by Naruto making a scary Yamato face.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2023
I’m just disgusted.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 6 . 9/12/2023
"Exactly. A shadow clone is supposed to be a perfect copy of you, but it's hard to actually copy everything. If you only make one or two at a time it's easy to copy all your combat skills, and that's all that matters in a fight. But if I make twenty clones at once they're each going to know maybe half my techniques, and they're a little on the slow side mentally. By the time we get up into the hundreds I'm making idiots with one good technique each, which means they need a lot of supervision.“

The level of nerfing is unreal.
Shadow clones don’t work this way. They’re perfect clones. They know everything their user does. No matter the number.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 3 . 9/12/2023
"Of course, it didn't work out like I'd hoped. I thought since my chakra is so huge I might be able to get around the usual limit on using elements you don't have an affinity for, but no such luck. I can do low-level techniques from all five elements, as long as I don't mind burning a ton of chakra. But I can't convert chakra to elemental form fast enough to make high-level techniques practical for anything but air."

I always hated how MCs in Naruto fics get nerfed in this manner.
Meanwhile, Hiruzen, Itachi, Sasuke, Kakashi, and many others can spam high jutsus of all elements ignoring their chakra nature.
At a certain point, chakra nature gets ignored.
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 1 . 9/11/2023
"Use too much and it will poison you, little fool. Human bodies aren't made to channel youki. You've only survived this long because of your little healing talent, and it has its limits."

"Yeah, what's up with that, anyway? I always wondered if it was something you were doing, or if I had some kind of bloodline power."

"Of course it's a bloodline, idiot. A remnant of the perfect health of the elder kami, in fact. No doubt some distance ancestor of yours was one of their playthings."

"Hey!"

The fox chuckled. "You should be grateful, brat. Without that power my youki would have burned you to ash the first time you called on it. As it is most of your power is consumed merely surviving the contamination that leaks through the seal."

These older fics always have that cringe youki nonsense.
Kagega chapter 12 . 9/9/2023
A fantastic story that died too soon.
Sypho Dias chapter 12 . 7/16/2023
bruh... you left it here? seriously? God man... why must the great fics always end abruptly...
Sypho Dias chapter 10 . 7/16/2023
I'm really starting to hate sakura... but well it's not like I didn't hate her in the first place so I suppose nothing has changed.
OkBoomer147 chapter 12 . 7/13/2023
Oh man what a place to stop!
Really amazing work mate!
chaoswizard chapter 12 . 5/15/2023
Keep it coming please it is good please
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