|Reviews for Indomitable|
| musme chapter 11 . 3/7
I like it
| Oh I am Slain chapter 11 . 2/27
Aww, reached the end. 'Tis a lovely story.
| Zahira Raja chapter 11 . 2/17
So I'm reading this story right, and I'm like 'OMFG this is FRIGGING amazing!" and then at chapter eleven I go down to click next and...THERE ISN'T A NEXT. And I'm like "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY GOD? WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?"
So basically what I'm trying to say is UPDATE.
| The Lightning Bandit chapter 11 . 2/11
I know you probably won't. But this really needs to be finished. Its a pretty godddamn amazing story. I'd love to see how this ends.
| Jimbobob5536 chapter 11 . 2/6
Man. Been a year since this updated. Kinda sad.
Oh well. It's been a good story.
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/4
This is a "powerful Naruto" story that actually makes fucking sense. A. I just had to reread it immediately when I finished all 11 chapters. Please tell us you're going to finish this one. Far too many good stories seem to stall halfway just when things start getting interesting (not that this wasn't from the start).
| BloodBanker69 chapter 11 . 1/27
That tornado was epic. And holy shit Hinata is Hizashi's kid. I guess that would explain Hiashi's resentment of her. Yugito has got the hots for Anko lol, nice. And we actually see Sasuke and he's in on Naruto's plan. Lot of shit went down this chapter and I really enjoyed it. too bad this hasn't been updated in over a year. Shit's getting even crazier than it already was. I really hope you update it soon.
| BloodBanker69 chapter 10 . 1/27
The Kyuubi tried to pull a fast one on our valiant hero, what a surprise. I'm glad you don't have him as some lovey dovey giant pokemon though. Anko is about to go off and rescue Yugito with Kakuzu hot on their heels, that's going to be exciting, I hope. Naruto adds another lady friend to his stable and it is seeming like Hinata is about to die. That would be a bummer. Ino is a professional seductionist, which seems oddly fitting. I must say though, that I really don't care for Ino one bit, so I probably won't care for any parts with her in the story. I liked the chapter and I'm about to read the next one.
| BloodBanker69 chapter 9 . 1/27
Deidara nuked Suna lol. Gaara's gonna be mad if he gets his life back. Sasori is dead and gone and apparently Hidan has a trick up his sleeve that Naruto has to worry about. The Kyuubi really wants to get home apparently and he has a degree of control in Shion's visions, so who knows whats really happening there. I guess Yugito is going to be an important character from now on if she was in that vision, along with two others, I wonder if they were also Jinchuuriki? I'm eager to find out so I'm going to go ahead and read the next chapter.
| BloodBanker69 chapter 8 . 1/27
Your portrayal of the Hyuuga is illogical, just saying. While all of this is going on in Demon Country Deidara is sending a million and one bombs to capture Gaara, since he was able to beat Gaara without all that jazz in canon I'm guessing this is going to be overkill. Yugito is on the verge of being captured, wonder if Naruto will actually be able to save her. Overall I enjoyed the chapter.
| BloodBanker69 chapter 7 . 1/27
Naruto is everywhere. The fucking leaves have ears with this guy around. I'm pretty excited to see how this whole Moryo thing is going to play out, and Kakuzu and Hidan are baiting Yugito to them. I wouldn't think Hinata could beat Anko already but I can deal with it. Liked the chapter, on to the next one.
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/26
An excellent story one worth continuing, I hope that you will finish this great story.
| garsdal chapter 11 . 1/26
THIS THING IS AWESOME.
such a shame its been over a year since the last update.
| BloodBanker69 chapter 6 . 1/24
It was a nice little training chapter. Good to know what I can expect to see in later chapters, as far as combat goes. I like the idea of Hinata using that Syrup Field and Hidden Mist technique to beef her up. A thought just came to me: why doesn't Sakura ever know how to use seals? She should put that intelligence to work and I would think that seals is a very mentally demanding field, something she should excel in. I like the armor that they have and I can't wait to see how the movie arc is going to play out.
| BloodBanker69 chapter 5 . 1/24
Well I liked it. Not much else to say. Nice job.