so fucking deranged and just for degenerates.

Is this actually E William Brown running this fan fiction? I hope so. I saw this story on his page in good reads and was trying to find it through the links. None of the links go to any place that has the story. I wound up having to do a blind search engine dive to get here.

Excellent story so far. I wound up copying it into a notes app. Sending it to the kindle app as a note file and convert it into an AI digital audio book through the assisted read function. That way, I can listen to it going down the road. Or at work.

So i'm actually here to ask if the author minds?

Well, it's too bad this is incomplete. Given it hasn't updated in a decade I assume it won't. Shame.

Holy shit. Naruto achieving such mastery with Shadow/Blood Clones to keep many copies of different forms fully operational at all times and across vast distances is always truly awesome to see.

I check back on this every once in a while, hoping that I've missed a notification that Shaper's come back to fanfiction and specifically this story. Alas, I am doomed to disappointment. Such a shame that a story with this promising of a start will go unfinished.

Truly is a shame that this story is dead.

...where is he better?ß or not a Fucking Moron hes still a stupid beta bitch cuck dumass fuck your trash fic

Massive. Overdeveloped.

When Anko made her strapon joke, it would have been funny if she had cut her thumb and made to cast “Summoning jutsu!: giant black dil-“ before being hastily interrupted by Naruto making a scary Yamato face.

I’m just disgusted.

"Exactly. A shadow clone is supposed to be a perfect copy of you, but it's hard to actually copy everything. If you only make one or two at a time it's easy to copy all your combat skills, and that's all that matters in a fight. But if I make twenty clones at once they're each going to know maybe half my techniques, and they're a little on the slow side mentally. By the time we get up into the hundreds I'm making idiots with one good technique each, which means they need a lot of supervision.“

The level of nerfing is unreal.
Shadow clones don’t work this way. They’re perfect clones. They know everything their user does. No matter the number.

"Of course, it didn't work out like I'd hoped. I thought since my chakra is so huge I might be able to get around the usual limit on using elements you don't have an affinity for, but no such luck. I can do low-level techniques from all five elements, as long as I don't mind burning a ton of chakra. But I can't convert chakra to elemental form fast enough to make high-level techniques practical for anything but air."

I always hated how MCs in Naruto fics get nerfed in this manner.
Meanwhile, Hiruzen, Itachi, Sasuke, Kakashi, and many others can spam high jutsus of all elements ignoring their chakra nature.
At a certain point, chakra nature gets ignored.

"Use too much and it will poison you, little fool. Human bodies aren't made to channel youki. You've only survived this long because of your little healing talent, and it has its limits."

"Yeah, what's up with that, anyway? I always wondered if it was something you were doing, or if I had some kind of bloodline power."

"Of course it's a bloodline, idiot. A remnant of the perfect health of the elder kami, in fact. No doubt some distance ancestor of yours was one of their playthings."

"Hey!"

The fox chuckled. "You should be grateful, brat. Without that power my youki would have burned you to ash the first time you called on it. As it is most of your power is consumed merely surviving the contamination that leaks through the seal."

These older fics always have that cringe youki nonsense.

A fantastic story that died too soon.

bruh... you left it here? seriously? God man... why must the great fics always end abruptly...