Reviews for Indomitable |
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![]() ![]() Well canonically naruto DOESN'T need artifacts.. and bloodlines? He's already got: Being a sensor type, ALL elemental affinities, lava release, boil release, magnet release, yin release and yang release, plus sage chakra and that's BEFORE the six-paths "pump up" gives him yin-yang release. By the end of the series (and that's WITHOUT counting the ink creation, curse seal creation/manipulation and OTHER powers from the tailed beasts *that were never given time*). The MAIN problem is as you said, a LOT of mental deficiencies, PLUS it's really HARD (nearly impossible) to try and gauge when to start the VAST pump up.(and how to keep the climb feasible) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll actually stop now, after ch10. Seems like a good point in time. I have some ideas where this will go and since there ain't much left, I might ad well have a conclusive imagined ending instead of getting some info on what might be. Overall... Straight fuckn decent. No work of art, but still a good read. Not complete, but yet, I regret nothing. |
![]() ![]() Honestly why bother make super!naruto if he’s just gonna spam clones and not be able to fight s ranks properly anyways? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Спасибо вам за ваше творчество, подписался, хоть и понимаю что фик заброшен. Но чудеса случаются! Надеюсь на ваше возвращение к этой работе. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please make more this fic is great I really love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! If only it wasn't abandoned... |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn I really. Wish you could have finished this |
![]() ![]() Nice! Awesome story! Shame you stopped writing it, I really liked it. |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading what there is of this. Do you still plan on finishing it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Powerful Naruto, but not written in a way that’s to cracky. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fine fic it is! Very unfortunate that you abandoned it:-( |
![]() ![]() continua resta historia es impresionante muy lejos de la original pero entretenida un excelente trabajo el que haces por favor continuala. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finish it! Finish it! Please? In all seriousness, I like your stuff, and I want to see where you are going with this one. |