|Reviews for Home|
| OmangoOlemonadeO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Oh I love family fluff )
Great writing, so cute!
| LadyTemeraire chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
*dies of cute AGAIN* Doggone it, stop doing that. :D
No, really, I love your stories about the Asia family, and this one in particular. There is nowhere near enough love in the fandom for Hong Kong (seriously, WTF, guys), and almost everything I've seen with him involves him being England's kick toy. Not cool.
This, though... This is poignant and sweet and so sadly beautiful that I teared up. The near-complete lack of dialogue allows you (and the reader) to focus on emotions and memories instead. And China's simple "You came back" and the hug and the last few lines... GUH. Amazing.
Please to write more stories? *puppy eyes*
| xblkdragonx chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
hahaha I already reviewed this on LJ but I'll review here too! I love the fact that you made Hong Kong so hesitant and uncertain for his return back to China. I think that's just so realistic that way. I honestly think you portrayed HK very well :D Keep up the good work!