|Reviews for After the Burning|
| Earwen85 chapter 16 . 4/5/2012
oh damn is not finished I never read a storyfrot he very beggining, like from Edward POV instead of bELLA in the books ok I will put it on to my alerts if someday you want to keep writin, i u did and you just didnt post it PLEASEEE send it to me!
| THe GANG chapter 16 . 8/23/2010
We think this is one of the best pre-twilight stories EVER! You are on our 10 best list.
| festus48 chapter 16 . 6/24/2010
I'm still with you and I do still think your chapters are great! :)
This chapter was amazing, it must be so hard for Esme, and for Edward and Carlisle too, having to watch her suffer over a small slip which yet costs so much.
| marsbareater12 chapter 16 . 6/24/2010
Hey ur back! Yay! Yes i'm still reading! Great chapter!
| Xx.Panic and Chaos.xX chapter 16 . 6/23/2010
this is a great story i cant wait to read more xx
| MaskedNarnianQueen chapter 16 . 6/21/2010
awesome chapter. i like that esme still has some human in her even when she's hunting humans
| marsbareater12 chapter 15 . 3/19/2010
WOw this is really good. Absolutley amazing! Can't wait for an update. Im guessing the rebelion comes soon? Have fun writing that. Can you co author one of my stories-Taken Hostage?
| festus48 chapter 15 . 3/8/2010
I think the chapter was utter brilliance like the other chapters
Your chapters are always great and I love reading them :)
| kellyb127 chapter 13 . 1/27/2010
You are doing really great job on this story, keep it up please, anxiously awaiting update xx
| BFHwantsblood chapter 14 . 12/19/2009
thankz this story is cool keep the chapters coming thanz again
| Obsesive Reader chapter 13 . 12/17/2009
It is intresting to be how future solider Edward transformed into self loathing Edward. Please update soon.
| festus48 chapter 13 . 10/7/2009
i dnt really get the last 3 sentences:S
but the rest is brilliant as always
| festus48 chapter 12 . 10/7/2009
tht was such a brilliant chapter!
poor Edward love reading ure story _
| MaskedNarnianQueen chapter 13 . 10/7/2009
| MaskedNarnianQueen chapter 12 . 10/7/2009