Reviews for Calling All Hosts! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Just wish it was a different pairing...like Hikaru and Kaoru |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think we should just declare Hunni and Mori the king and queen of shipping. They don't just ship it the make it happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. You might want to find an editor though... you have a few errors. Most of them aren't distracting though (which is a sign of an engaging story) except in this chapter Kyouya acts as if this is the first time Haruhi said Tosca's name, when she actually told it to him before she went to the store. Just thought you should know. Kudos on the story so far though. Kyouya's a little out of character, but it works. And you're doing great keeping the others in character. :) |
![]() ![]() Cute! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! You did a very good job. I really enjoyed reading this. |
![]() ![]() Idk how this story only has 97(well now 98) reviews, cause it is amazing, and not OOC at all. Really good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, It was a very enjoyable story to read with few typing mistakes (I imagaime you typed in a rush in some parts). I could not help but laugh through out the story because you had the characters just right. I was really well written and you should be porud of yourself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, first of all I'd like to thank you for the great fic. it reminded me that while the KyouyaxHaruhi pairing isn't my fave, it's still very valid. while there were a few grammatical errors it was nothing serious and the story on a whole made up for it. i enjoyed reading this one a lot, and i'll definitely read it again. thanks a ton! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, just finished reading you fanfic and I think it's great. My brain automatically changes sentences when it sees a grammar error or something and there was one sentence I couldn't figure out how to change and therefore couldn't make sense of but it wasn't serious. Also, it was a bit weird hearing Kyoya saying love at the end of his sentences directed to Haruhi after they started dating. Other than that, I really loved the story. Thank you very much for the entertainment |
![]() ![]() It was a good story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. It was easy to imagine and I like that. I personally think you should write another Fan-Fiction including this or another Haruhi x Host Club member. Thank you and have a splendid day. As I said make another! I will subsrcibe to make sure none of your stories are left unread. Continue with writing. :) Sincerely, xx Rapid xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved your story! ALOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter! I loved Kyoya's message for the other hosts! |
![]() ![]() That was BEAUTIFUL! I loved it sooo much. It was perfect, and I can't stop smiling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this story. i must say though from the title i pictured like a gigantic holographic H floating in the sky and the host's all fighting crime. but i loved this story thanks for writting |