Ok, so first off, I'm sorry I didn't review this last night, but I was reading this awesome story on my phone when I was supposed to be asleep, and I was so tired I fell asleep with my phone in hand. Second, THIS STORY ROCKED! You got all of the characters perfectly, the plot never got boring, and...well...this is definately going on my faves list!

Okay, yay for fluff, first of all! And second, one comment: haruhi says toscas name in chappie 3 as well...I suppose kyo-kun didn't notice? That doesn't sound like him...

Yep, its decided:every chapter shall be reviewed by moi. Here's my long, wordy review for this chapter...: KAWAII!

Awwww! That was cute! Poor haru-chan and all, but I 3 kyouya! They would be great together, WAAAAAAAY better than tamaharu, ne? And yes, I might actually review each chapter...

O.O. scaaaaaaaarrryyyy kyouya...wow...gonna go read more now, just had to do that...

I love this story so much but I kind feel bad for your OC. You don't want to get the Host Club mad at you

Actually, I do believe that she made a spelling mistake.

In this line: "...or by god suffer not only my wrath but my families as well."

'families' should have been 'family's', am I correct?

Other than that, I think this is a great story. I thank you for making it. Although, I would wish for you to make a sequel. Thank you, again.

I LOVED IT! ABSOLUTELY MAGNIFICENT! I really like the storyline, and the way you used your words mostly, but...

Time for some criticism:

The thing that bugged me the most while reading this is that some of the sentences you used didn't make sense at all, to the point that I couldn't even correct them in my head, 'cause I didn't know what the hell you were trying to say, but really! Your story was fantastic to read. You didn't have any spelling errors (which really get on my nerves, because I really hate it when people don't know how to spell, but if have ever corrected any spelling errors, I try not to make it sound harsh, people just need more practice), so you did really quite well. All you need is someone to edit the story for you!

Anyhoo! Gotta go! I'm a very important person. Lot's of reviews to write...well, not really. I have work to do. Well done, and keep on writing fantastically!

Great story...

A very good couple of chapters...

Good story love it...

nice but i think that there should be a sequel?

haruhi should get pregnant

:D

I love this... :)

I LOVE THIS STORY!

THANK YOU! :-D