Reviews for Unraveling Slowly
AntarcticLight chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
This was wonderfully written! The emotion you conveyed was perfect! I feel like this was acutally Jonny; a man with so much swirling chaos inside of him. Great Job!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Very, very well done. I especially love your recap of the scene where Penelope puts her hands over his.
MidnightRosebud chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
You write very poetically. It was fascinating to read.

The middle (and largest) paragraph has a few grammatical errors riddled through it, but otherwise I throughly enjoyed your story.

Thank you so much for writing it :)
kasandra16 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
That was really beautiful. I think you really caught Johnny's state of mind during the time. It was very moving.
Exmoorpony chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
More! I want more! Penelope! Please!
EnsignAbby chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Very nice :) You do Johnny justice.
Shakespeare's Lady chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Good job!
Santiva Potter chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Lovely work.

Much Love,

Santiva Potter
mikoki chapter 1 . 2/16/2010

Just finished watching penelope, and I immediately went looking for fanfic, 'cause the movie just blew me away. It was fun, refreshing, and I just love the two leading actors, their talent and their chemistry together. I hoped, but thought I wouldn't find any. Needless to say I was pretty siked when I saw a couple of them. But On top of that, I'm so thankful that what I read was pretty amazing too, and not some brainless drabble. This was poignant, and very true to character. Your style, fluency, talent is A-quality shit, hon! and I just want to thank you for the time and effort you invested in writing this! THANK YOU! cheers! Mie
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Good insight into his thoughts! :D
jumira-wings chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
You are an astounding writer. This is amazingly poetic.