|Reviews for Distractions|
| lux chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Really hot. Epic finale.
| LyssaLaughable chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
awwww, but that is so depressing!
and yet, it was still written fantastically. D
| HarryPotterResidentEvilFan chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
The ending was amazing. A different take on it. For only your first, you did hella good! I love this kind of fic. Probably because I enjoy drama and angst and whatnot.
| BrunetteWeasley13 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Loved it. The characters were perfect and the ending that tied it into a bigger story... that's what a one shot is supposed to be.
| tambrathegreat chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Now that was a good stab at slash and a great tie-in with cannon. Beautiful job on this piece. I tried to read it on LJ, but the letters were too small for me to make out easily.
Really, this is your first real attempt at slash? Great job. I will be reccing this fic to others who are inclined to be fans of James and Sirius.
| K. East chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
So, not going to lie, this is pretty epic. I'm not an enormous fan of slash, but this is one of those that actually makes sense and treats the characters with respect. I'm impressed that you can jump totally out of your comfort zone and still produce something of this quality.
Linking this all to why Lily and James didn't choose Remus as Secret-Keeper, by the way, was a pretty clever and touching ending. It would definitely explain the apparent rift between Remus and Sirius. :3
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Oh, wow. That was funny and scarily sexy. I can almost see it happening. Your arrogant Sirius is just amazingly brilliant, and I love Lily. The ending was inspired. Kudos.
You should write more Marauders ;-)
| Evildevilangel chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Oh. Poor Remus!
| Writting2StayHalfSane chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Excellent. I'm not one who likes slash much but this was great. And, ouch, that last line stung.
| Lucky1111 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
| madmaddiee chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Wow. Yeah, that was... yeah.
I've got no idea how much more slash your muse has in store, but YESMOREPLZ!
The entire first part of the story, the "Norman cock" bit was inspired. I absolutely adored how there was no stopping Black, either his mouth, or his "mouth". And James was the not-so-unfortunate target.
Wonderful job with the evil prompt you were given. The banter all throughout the piece was realistic and hysterical. LOVED how you wrote Sirius' personality. This is exactly how I imagine some experimentation on James' part taking place. It actually felt... organic, you know? Like it was some part of a coming-of-age thing that James did. It happened once, and then never again.
But the chemistry here between the Marauders (er... don't think I saw Peter) was delish. And it all felt very teenager-y for their ages.
Just, well done! And the smutty stuff? You did such a great job. Build up, a little fun here and there, and then leaving some up to the reader's imagination. Great work! Plus, favoriting, because I need to return to this story when I write my own slash stuff.
| Princess Gillybean chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
This was really, really good. I wasn't sure if I would read it because the idea of James slash makes my skin crawl in a non good way, but you're an awesome writer so I got over it. Sirius was so funny, the dialogue was great. I felt sorry for James, he didn't seem in control very much :)
My favourite part was the Lily/James bit, and the ending was one of the best short descriptions of what happened to the marauders I've read.
Now I just have to talk myself into reading the lj version.
| verity candor chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
...That was a fun, fun read...
| hermoinelvsronald chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
i have never read a better slash before
you have a real talent for coming up great story lines and plots from a mere idea given to you
keep up the great writing