|Reviews for Entangled|
| Kasume-sama chapter 23 . 1/1
I love your story! It's well thought out, exciting, and just slashy enough to entertain my crazy sladin obsession without the story being drowned in romance haha. A great read for sure and I can't wait to see how you continue :D
| darkwolf1121 chapter 21 . 11/30/2014
THE PUNS! THEY BUUUUUURN
| darkwolf1121 chapter 9 . 11/29/2014
Okay, this is my second or third time reading this story, and I've gotta say, I love it. The dynamics between the characters (particularly between Robin and Slade) go perfectly with the moral ambiguities Slade himself projects. Although I am...not happy...with the ending, the entire story is very well written with excellent attention to detail and flow. I would even go so far as to say this is my favorite Teen Titans story on this site.
And now that I've gotten that out of my system- on with the awesome story!
| emma3883 chapter 7 . 11/15/2014
This is a great story and I find it very amusing
| darkwolf1121 chapter 23 . 7/29/2014
I was up until five in the morning reading through this because of you and your epic narrative skills. I hope you're happy...
| Namikozaki chapter 23 . 4/11/2014
W-w-w-whaaaaaaatt? YOU TOYED WITH MY HEART! HOW COULD SLADE DO THAT? IM SO ASHAMED. I FEEL REALLY SORRY FOR ROBIN, AND CAN SEE WHAT HES GOING THROUGH! ROBIN DESPISES AND LOATHES SLADE, BUT CAN NOT BRING HIMSELF TO REALLY HATE HIM, BECAUSE A SMALL PART OF HIS MIND STILL BELIEVES THERES GOOD IN HIM. IM ACTUALLY SCARED TO LOOK FOR PT 2 REALLY GOOD STORY, But your plot twists were so unconventional that I cried in the last chapter! (Seriously, how could SLADE DO that? ;_;)
| Renx27 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
I really love the story and the plot in the end. I liked too there was no slash or over rated romance XD and the story was really interested to the point that i couldn't stop myself from reading and finishing the 23 chapters in two days (curiosity killed me XD). I just felt a bit of gap regarding the part they infected robin with the final serum disappearing for 2 weeks and there wasn't much details about it. I was a bit puzzled with the slade hand-breaking-turtler-robin-thing after he appeared as immortal. I read you r writing a sequel? what is the title? excited after reading the epilogue/prologue part
| rajahsipad chapter 23 . 2/11/2014
| PlatinumOwl chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
You are one of the few Teen Titan writers I can honestly say I love to read.
| chocolate-sugar chapter 23 . 11/24/2013
This was a great story truly one of the best iv come across. You're writing style is very good, I couldn't take my eyes away!
I sincerely hope you make a sequel :)
| jamila chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Make a teen titans Story entangled Chapter 2
| Hawktinge chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Hey weres the next story? This one is the best fanfic I have EVER read and I've read A LOT!
| Zany the Nerd chapter 23 . 8/6/2013
I started reading this fic yesterday and couldn't will myself to stop! And talk about a plot twist! As Robin began to trust Slade, so did I. When Slade betrayed Robin, I felt betrayed as well. You did a FANTASTIC job with this story! I am so glad I read it! You are a great author! This story had everything from humor to suspense! )
| Scintillant-H chapter 22 . 3/23/2013
I'm not sure what I thought of Robin's odd obsession with his blood-wet shirt... it didnt seem very much like him, but as I said, I'm not sure what to think of it. It wasnt enough "un-Robin" to say it was a bad move, but it wasnt quite enough "Robin-like"... I think the concept of Robin doing something that annoyed Slade to the point of tearing it up was a good move, very good actually, but I for some reason didnt like the wet shirt being the target...
With everything else going on, I dont know what else you could have substituted for the wet shirt. Sorry for being so undecided _;
Closet jokes XDD they invaded my brain and I kept thinking "oh... please no 'in the closet' jokes..." I was very glad that they were done tastefully ;) I admit, it made me laugh. I love in the closet jokes, I just didnt usually see Slade/Robin/Wintergreen being the types, though I'm still trying to keep in mind that you're writing a showcomic combo of Slade.
That really screwed me up in the beginning (not your fault, my fault) it was the reason for most of my "problems" with this story. Once I realized he was a combo-Slade, it made more sense and I was able to adjust.
I'm so glad Wintergreen asked "How can you search a room and not check the closet?" that nagged at me XDD I was calling Blood's men morons in my head. I figured maybe they were in a hurry, but I do so hate when people make moves like that (not you in this story, just people like Blood's men-they DO that in reality and in movies/video games sometimes and it BUGS me!)
XDD I liked the "what's code orange" interrogation. At least before the dude gave up the real info. I was totally thinking "orange juice", I kid you not.
(about to go on a seemingly irrelevent ramble-you may skip this paragraph if you wish.)
O.O I'm having flashbacks of when Alucard yelled at Seras when she was horrified that he killed a mass of people who came in to kill them. I dont know if you read Hellsing (or seen "Hellsing Ultimate"-I havent seen it but it was supposed to be based off the manga, which I have read) but when Alucard and Seras go looking for Nazis to kill in South America, the Nazis tell the authorities that Alucard and Seras are terrorists and before the 2 know it, their hotel is evacuated and they're surrounded by police. Of course, the police are innocent of anything and so when Alucard killed them all with great glee, Seras was appalled and scared, thinking that human life is precious (even though they're both vampires) at first he says "...so?" and she keeps bawling about it "but-but they were human!" (they usually kill other vampires, which the Nazis are) he eventually gets mad at her and grabs her collar, screaming in her face that it doesnt matter what they are. If they come in to attack, you kill them, all of them, no exceptions. Someone with a weapon who plans on using that weapon on you is an enemy, no matter what. Seras didnt really listen, but Alucard backed off and just said "no... this could work, too..." allowing her to be as innocent as she pleases.
Yeah, sorry for the ramble, Slade's trying to explain to Robin why he killed the "code orange" guy reminded me of the Hellsing scene. I love that scene _ nice to see it used again ;)
Ohhhhhhh, I laughed so hard when Slade said "Why does everyone think I'm going to rape them?" looking at Robin XDDDD
have you seen Family Guy? When Quagmire is teaching Chris how to do math problems that all add up to "8008" and then Chris says "we should get 2 calculators and hold them up next to each other" XDD Quag says "yes! find one! do it! yes!" omg, geek porn right there!
Throughout this whole chapter I loved Robin's refusal to accept Slade's killings. Personally, I liked Slade's killings. But it was SO "Robin" to be that way, and to be so stubborn about it _
I was unbearably shocked when Slade did the lip thing O.O' I wont say it's not something he'd do, I just... didnt see it coming. With all the other insults he'd throw at people, to take one to the extreme isnt something you usually see from others. Nice touch.
I have to ask, was this something that you had in mind from the start?
Robin's asking Slade if he was sure that Blood was dead XD come now, Robin... need you ask?
(not bashing the move, it was a good twist, I'm just teasing Robin)
-Robin: "She needs to do that LESS. I'm not a nice guy all the time ya know...!"
hm... I really think Robin should have figured out "the plan" sooner than he did... When someone gives a look of racognition, such as the man who recognized Wintergreen, it's usually rather obvious, especially to a trained professional like Robin.
But I feel sorry for him, believing in Santa Clause only to find out was all fake...
oh, my, what was that in Blood's head, that little memory of what Slade had said...?
BWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I dont care what DCU writer moron made Slade be controlled in a crappy moment of DC comics history, no one can beat Slade's willpower!
I... loved that ending...! HUZZAH! finally, a good ending! ... wait-epilogue-?
nuuuuuuuuuuuuu! whyy...? I... I hate sequels... rarely are they done right... not everyone can pull a James Cameron's "Aliens"... that was such a good ending... must there be an epilogue...?
(now looking, yeah, there it is ; well, I have more to read later!)
That cheerleader image is coming along ;) slowly, but only because I started taking commissions for devianART points. Humorous thing is, in my geeky Slade fandom and in seeing how taking commission work is much like being a mercenary, I imagine what words of advice Slade would have.
yes, as if he were teaching me-because I'm a Slade-loving loser like that 3 XDD Soon now I will analyze the mechas of "Code Geass" and design a mecha unit for Slade... heehee...
Anyrate, when I get a rough image of your hair drawn, I'll send you a PM using my FFic account, so you dont have to jump onto dA all the time to check on me (assuming that you were a little bit) I know you're not big on dA so if I ever want to talk you up, I'll pop onto ffic ;)
| Euphoric Leo chapter 23 . 2/14/2013
Woot! Now, that's a story! Your first Fanfiction? Woow. And the part where Raven felt his emotions through hand contact. Raven is so cool..a good friend. And Robin will continue to hide his secrets of what happened from his friends. I will be grinning for a long time from this story. Hhaaahaa. So crash!