Well what can I say?
It was a replacement for the movie. That's all I feel I need to say.
As for the cliffhanger... *shudders*
Anyways, nice story. It was well-written and kept me interested to the end.
All the best,
Write on!

Loved this story! it's certainly a sight better than anything Señor Bay ever made. it's too bad you don't want to write any more fan fictions, there could be a heck of a sequel to this! and a heck of a prequel too to be honest. explaining how the fallen was made perhaps, (I always thought he was one of the original 13 primes brought forth by the power of the all spark, and he betrayed the rest of them, in fact, his true name is proof of that, as he was the original Megatron. of course, it was a different name, he actually was called Megatronus Prime. a good way to connect that together in a prequel might be that after he turned on them, he wandered the universe for a while, then Unicron would've offered him the chance to have the power he craved, and sent him back to Cybertron to gain their faith and get him back there to devour the planet, but since he was changed by Unicron, he would no longer care about them. and, well, the rest is already written by you, but you could talk about it in more detail in a prequel story) and a sequel might be pretty great too, like having Megatron revived by Unicron, made into Galvatron, given Scourge and Cyclonus to command, and told to go to earth to prepare it for Unicron's consumption. while that's going on, maybe Sam and Mikaela finally get married, and maybe even have a kid, maybe named Spike perchance? and new autobots, or ones from around the galaxy that haven't died yet and came to earth, might be around too, like Pipes, Huffer, wheeljack, Hot Rod, Blurr, Ultra Magnus, Springer, hound (or Bulkhead, whichever you think he'd be), Trailbreaker, cliffjumper, and whoever else. I imagine if Glavatron found Starscream, he would, like he did in the 1986 film, reduce him to ashes with his cannon, and probably take control of the decepticons again, but might not tell them who he's really working for, and if he does try to tell, Unicron would torture him, as he needs him to get him to earth to eat it. (also, why didn't you put that hacker lady and her friend in this too if I may ask? also, I love the symbolism in the story, not sure you even caught some of it, but, megatron was resurrected from the sea, like the anti-christ, and the Fallen comes from the earth, like the False Prophet, pretty cool huh?) I hope you come back to this sandbox soon, lord knows we need more rewrites of the transformers movies that are like this!

UNICRON?! Oh Hell's gates... That thing is not good.

Hell of an ending you gave this. Not a bad one.

Wow, there is so many thing that I could comment, but this story is amazing! I understand that's your last fanfiction, but the cliffhanger could have made space for a great fanfic, I mean, if there is any chance of Hasbro take a look... But, again, good work!

Nice end!

O.O Wow! Great final! But poor Ironhide :(

wow, this is really good. i mean really good, better then the movie!

Great Chapter!

ohh shhh! Galvitron

Hooray for Sequel hooks.

Woah, nice ending for the chapter.

The ending of this chapter screamed sequel to me, but I know there won't be one and strangely enough, I'm okay with that.

The fandom is losing one of it's great writers for greener pastures, but it was an honor having you write for it along with the rest of us mediocre/novice writers. You are one of several talented fans who gave the rest of us inspiration to strive to become better writers.

Good luck with your novels and thank you.

This fic has been awesome so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter. That said, I think Megatron's death was extremely anti-climactic. Though it'll probably set the stage for him to become Galvatron, so no complaints here. Update soon!

After watching DOTM earlier, the part about reanimated Ironhide was especially depressing to read. But still, the chapter was excellent. The fight scene between Optimus and the Fallen was pretty entertaining.

I can't wait to see the next chapter.