Reviews for Always Chasing Jarod
BallsBreaker chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
oh, god MP and Gates married and with kids. that was disgusting
Miravisu chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Teehee, cute story, love the title and setup. Chasing Jarod, and then continuing to chase the younger Jarod, ie her son :)
gemini006007 chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
Hi Donna,
Very sweet story and quite an interesting ending.
Hope you write more.
makasarili chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
I liked this story very much, letting Parker have a life away from the Centre.
punkrockllama578 chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
hmm, i dont think he could have survived that, but its an interesting idea.
jo the pretender chapter 1 . 3/26/2002
what? I got confused whenthe kids entered the story please e_mail me and explain to this story.
Maggy chapter 1 . 2/1/2002

What a great idea!

I tip my imaginary hat to you for ingenuity. :-)

I admit I'm a JMP person, but I really like this one.

From a critical perspective-

maybe a beta reader could help catch some of the grammaticals, and point out a few places where further development would enhance the moment of "revelation"...

Nice work!
Rosemary chapter 1 . 4/2/2001
Good story, had me a little confused for a minute but great ending!
Isis chapter 1 . 2/12/2001
Good story. I little far fetched on the Tommy part, but what the hell. Makes for a good plot.
K. Wyse chapter 1 . 9/13/2000
Sweet! Odd and a bit disconnected here and there but it was easy to catch on to what was happening. I really liked it.


Steph179 chapter 1 . 8/16/2000
Great story! I couldn't help but laugh when I read the ending. Nice twist!
ElfFlame chapter 1 . 8/15/2000
Cute. Missed some of those episodes, but I like the way it ties it all together.
AB2 chapter 1 . 8/15/2000
Unexpected endings are always good. i really liked this story a lot, but i'm hoping you'll be posting the 'lies that blind' series soon. (are we bugging you too much about it? - sorry. ;) )
Superfarmer chapter 1 . 8/11/2000
Loved it! Great little twist at the end... caught me offguard.
QT Roo chapter 1 . 8/5/2000
Awesome story:)
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