Reviews for Out of the Ashes Hope Arises 3: Destiny
Sari Sumdac chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
WRITE MORE, ! oh and take the whole cupord while your at it
Glittersong chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Amazing as usual. You should write another one where his girls actually come to earth. I'd definitely read that one.
Fang Cullen chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Ah! Wicked! Though it was short, it was really cool. Yes, please write more.
Bunnylass chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
D'aww, that was perfect! Absolutely, wonderfully perfect. :) I love how you explained what happened to the Matrix of Leadership. And - lmao - that he fell and bounced his way down the pyramid. Gotta love him, right. :D

My favourite part was definitely him speaking with the Primes though. It was very fitting, and written amazingly. And the touch with him getting the feelings of pride from his father along with his voice...

I loved it! I loved the whole thing. :) Keep 'em coming!

P.S. I hate it when I leave short reviews, so here's my hammer *passes it over* feel free to smack me on the head with it. :D
Kibble Beast chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
aww... that was so sweet ...

i nearly wailed in the cinema when optimus got... um, impaled.

one of my friends understood. she held my hand.

primus, i get over-emotional.

i'm getting sniffly now. darn.

nice idea...i hope in tf3 that the matrix and optimus are 'joined' properly.

that's not the right word. oh well. on with my bad review.

i love the thought of optimus bouncing down a pyramid.

oh, um... i think you may have missed a word out?

near the end, is optimus taking an involuntary step?

can't wait for more! xD
Bumblebee's Girl chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
ar!

this is such a sweet series!

is there gonna be anymore?

xx
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Interesting.

C.D.