|Reviews for Breakthrough|
| Jane chapter 38 . 1/27
Oh, I'm enjoying the story, but I just want to slap Bella silly. If she isn't blushing, she's crying. If she isn't crying, she can't breathe, or can't think, or can't speak when she wants to. She's so indecisive it's irritating. Now she's upset the beautiful Jake, and she will be agonising over her behaviour, but it never changes! I really don't see why he is so besotted. But of course I will keep on reading.
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/29/2014
You turned Jake into an emo pussy like the dead sparkly corpse. Jakes a good guy we get it. Girls think the way you have Jake. Stop it already. You need to try to get into the male mindset and a wolf driven male mindset at that.
Uhg this is just sooo dull.
| Revelation Rebel chapter 21 . 1/5/2014
Hmmm, if Jacob Black sneaks into my room tonight, will he imprint on me?
| ES.FI chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
Amazing nothing but. Sorry I am reading this a few years late Date: Sunday 15 December 2013 Time : 22:18
| PastOneonta chapter 45 . 11/23/2013
This is a lovely story. Jacob and the Pack are warm and wonderful. Bella matures and becomes a complete young woman. The. Amps were written very well. Thanks for the epilogue too and the look into their future.
| dplacker chapter 45 . 9/18/2013
I loved this story! Jacob stories are the best!
| dplacker chapter 34 . 9/17/2013
I cant believe hes hurt. again!
| dplacker chapter 33 . 9/17/2013
I hope he tears her apart
| dplacker chapter 31 . 9/17/2013
Damn! wish I was her in that one!
| dplacker chapter 24 . 9/17/2013
I hate that this is going like this. but I love any and all Jake stories
| dplacker chapter 22 . 9/17/2013
I think this chick that's after Jake needs to back the heck up!
| dplacker chapter 21 . 9/17/2013
I feel bad for Jake now. He needs a hug
| dplacker chapter 20 . 9/17/2013
AHHHH! So close! But he is a gentleman.
| dplacker chapter 19 . 9/17/2013
I love this. He's such a sweetheart
| dplacker chapter 17 . 9/17/2013
Jacob Black at the prom? That would be yummy!