|Reviews for The Letter|
| Veganista chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
I quite liked it! You have a sort of . . . seamless writing style, and it doesn't get in the way of letting the characters stand out. You might want to reconsider your word choice in places; I don't see how you can pry gently, or pry away from something. And the image of overflowing in happiness at the start didn't really work for me, though I can imagine that you didn't want to elaborate and obstruct the flow of events. And I don't believe that Briony would rush home on the first train just because the letter said 'urgent' - didn't she once ignore Leon when he came up to London just to see her? But I'm probably being overly critical, and I did enjoy this. The best praise I can give is that I wish it wasn't a one-shot. I really want to know more.
| pearlchavez chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I liked it, but I see exactly what you mean when you say it didn't turn out well. It doesn't seem too inaccurate, and you seem to have fleshed out the characters well. So don;t fret, it wasn't the worst thing ever written...I think there's another one called 'Atonement' on here that's the definition of terrible
| Ninja Elsa chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
good start... I know what you mean about not getting it the way you want... but I agree... continue!
| princesssparkle01 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
i want to know how and whether robbie was with her...