|Reviews for To see the Stars|
| Burning Souls chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
| kyouruhi24 chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
i wish for:
1; an update
2. a real suzalulu kiss
3, a lemon
yay! will they come true fairy godmother?
ahah,... i really enjoyed these lil bits of suzalulu moments
| alyuchiha913 chapter 4 . 10/14/2009
LOLOLOLOL! Freakin priceless! The last three lines were just epic. LOL.
Anyways, onto errors. Just two actually, and it's really just the same mistake twice. You used "through" instead of "thought" in this line: "I seriously through I was going bald, just because he through he saw a lice."
I hope you write more of these drabbles soon. I'm totally having fun reading them!
Peace Out! _
| alyuchiha913 chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
Ahh...the first one was too sweet! I loved it! And this one...lmao. An "indirect kiss" huh? I like it!
As for errors, you typed "in the bench" instead of "on the bench" in the first line, and you should leave out the "do" in the line "hopefully do not die of sunstroke". I think that's it.
And yes, I LOVE it when Suzaku speaks Japanese...so sexy. XD
Peace Out! _
| Elizabeth northcutt chapter 3 . 8/24/2009
haha yelling with her megafone
that sound so familiar
i i'm reading ..so read mines!
| Elizabeth northcutt chapter 2 . 8/24/2009
haha i think is more than clearly that i like it a lot
| Emo Headphonez chapter 4 . 8/23/2009
This one made me giggle.
Especially the "Suzaku, why the hell are you looking for wigs on E-bay?" line. Made my night.
| nomnomm chapter 4 . 8/23/2009
2 things 1) it's know, not knew and 2)it's him not he...
i really like your drabbles... is there anyway they could be longer?
| mochiusagi chapter 4 . 8/23/2009
haha that was soo funny! poor suzaku though.
| tastes-like-ciel chapter 4 . 8/23/2009
xD lol That was cute and sweet. :D Can't wait for more~
| wow fail chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
LOL are you serious about this story? be honest, was this a real attempt at a story?
| Wow chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
This story sucks. Give up on writing. Seriously.
| Elizabeth northcutt chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
solo espero 2 dias mas y ya subire algo, lo que sea que me encuentre por ahi guardado
deviant sera despues
y el macfic!
| tastes-like-ciel chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
Aw. xD I loved it.
| mochiusagi chapter 2 . 8/5/2009
aw that was cute!more please!