Reviews for Over the Twisting Line of His Spine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bittersweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, I almost cried. This was heartwrenching.. but so, so beautiful. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very glad they found each other, but what if they get pregnant? I hope that they can eventually settle down and live a peaceful life. I doubt that Edward could be in too much legal trouble when he killed James, especially with a good lawyer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome yar |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully descriptive. I felt like I was right there along with them on their journey. I'm emotionally spent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I CRIED. SO LOVELY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haunting. I love the flow of ur writing. Ur style engulfs me. This was beautifully painful. Bittersweet & satisfying. |
![]() ![]() This was really great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your first one? i see it is sparsely woven through with quotes from the original, but nothing else about this story but that and the character's names is of her. this is all you and gloriously so! The angst and pain about which you write somehow soothes this old woman's heart and soul. a potent and telling harbinger of stories to come. I love this. |
![]() ![]() Woah. I'm speechless. Thta was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was heartbreakingly beautiful. I loved your poetic words. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, beautiful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is really old and has been posted forever, but I finally got around to reading it. Wow, this was beautiful and heart-wrenching and just amazing. I hope you won the contest! |