Reviews for Over the Twisting Line of His Spine
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 1/22/2024
Bittersweet
CynMar Rom chapter 1 . 5/8/2023
Oh man, I almost cried.
This was heartwrenching.. but so, so beautiful.
Thanks for sharing!
BELAVERA chapter 1 . 3/28/2021
I'm very glad they found each other, but what if they get pregnant? I hope that they can eventually settle down and live a peaceful life. I doubt that Edward could be in too much legal trouble when he killed James, especially with a good lawyer.
heartstrings13 chapter 1 . 6/1/2019
Awesome yar
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 3/9/2018
Beautifully descriptive. I felt like I was right there along with them on their journey. I'm emotionally spent.
charbronte chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
I CRIED. SO LOVELY.
meelee72 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Haunting.
I love the flow of ur writing. Ur style engulfs me.
This was beautifully painful.
Bittersweet & satisfying.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
This was really great!
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
your first one? i see it is sparsely woven through with quotes from the original, but nothing else about this story but that and the character's names is of her. this is all you and gloriously so! The angst and pain about which you write somehow soothes this old woman's heart and soul. a potent and telling harbinger of stories to come. I love this.
20Chloe02 chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Woah. I'm speechless. Thta was really good!
CherieCherry chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
This was heartbreakingly beautiful. I loved your poetic words. Thank you.
midnight1899 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
wow, beautiful story
loventherussian17 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
love it
Baandfam69 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you.
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I know this is really old and has been posted forever, but I finally got around to reading it. Wow, this was beautiful and heart-wrenching and just amazing. I hope you won the contest!
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